Roy Pett Poet Rhyme

Precious Moments

Holiday romance

Sitting on balcony in bright sun shine
my hand reaches yours, our fingers entwine
drinking coffee in bath robes, Rose design,

views of the Mediterranean Sea
feeling happiness, secure, worry free 
enjoying your mocha me with latte,

your scent playing havoc with my senses
words of passion breaking my defences
beginning to feel quite apprehensive,

Stare into your eyes, those beautiful eyes
so blue, so clear, so honest and so wise
this precious moment, hope it never dies.

Composed  04/03/2017

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Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2017 at 8:06 PM your entry is really beautiful and romantic. Glad to see it made the winner list because it was one of my favorites of those I read. Congrats on your win. Roy Pett March 25, 2017 at 8:14 PM Thank you very much Andrea for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support and encouragement which is much appreciated, Roy. :))

Janice Canerdy March 23, 2017 at 5:23 PM A 7 for your winning poem, Roy! Janice Roy Pett March 23, 2017 at 6:01 PM Thank you very much Janice, a 7 is very generous but thank you so much again, Roy. :))

Kai Michael Neumann March 23, 2017 at 2:35 AM Great moment, great write, congratulations. Kai Roy Pett March 23, 2017 at 4:23 AM Thank you very much Kai, so pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support and encouragement, Roy. :))

Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2017 at 10:43 PM Such a lovely scene, Roy! "Drinking coffee in rose-design robes, sounds so lovely! Those blue eyes with virtuous character! Congrats on your placement! :) Kim Roy Pett March 23, 2017 at 4:20 AM Thank you very much Kim for your very kind comment and the opportunity and placement in your competition most enjoyable, thanks again, Roy. :))

Deborah Burch March 22, 2017 at 10:40 PM Congratulations Roy!! Well done! Such a romantic you are! :) Hugggs. Deb Roy Pett March 23, 2017 at 4:11 AM Thank you very much Deborah for your very kind comment, I have adored my wife for over 30 years without a cross word and show her my appreciation when ever I can, thanks again, Roy. :))

Kim Merryman March 8, 2017 at 4:38 PM Roy, I enjoyed reading your sweet, romantic poem! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim Roy Pett March 8, 2017 at 5:50 PM Thank you very much Kim for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this, thanks again, Roy.

Elizabeth Kinch March 7, 2017 at 12:24 AM This is so good....I imagined myself with my latte enjoying the sun and those eyes! A 7 as always. Roy Pett March 7, 2017 at 6:18 AM Thank you very much Elizabeth, so pleased you liked this poem, and thanks for awarding it a 7, you are so generous, thanks again, Roy. :)

CayCay Godwin March 6, 2017 at 7:32 PM I love it! Good luck in the contest and all else! CayCay Roy Pett March 7, 2017 at 6:15 AM Thank you very much CayCay for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this, much appreciated, thanks again, Roy.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 4:14 AM - A beautiful place with romance and love - Beautifully written, Roy - Happy Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Roy Pett March 5, 2017 at 6:55 AM Thank you very much Anne-Lise your kindness is much appreciated, Wishing you and yours a happy Sunday too, Roy.