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Holiday romance Sitting on balcony in bright sun shine my hand reaches yours, our fingers entwine drinking coffee in bath robes, Rose design, views of the Mediterranean Sea feeling happiness, secure, worry free enjoying your mocha me with latte, your scent playing havoc with my senses words of passion breaking my defences beginning to feel quite apprehensive, Stare into your eyes, those beautiful eyes so blue, so clear, so honest and so wise this precious moment, hope it never dies. Composed 04/03/2017

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Date: 3/25/2017 8:06:00 PM
your entry is really beautiful and romantic. Glad to see it made the winner list because it was one of my favorites of those I read. Congrats on your win.
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/25/2017 8:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support and encouragement which is much appreciated, Roy. :))
Date: 3/23/2017 5:23:00 PM
A 7 for your winning poem, Roy! Janice
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Date: 3/23/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Janice, a 7 is very generous but thank you so much again, Roy. :))
Date: 3/23/2017 2:35:00 AM
Great moment, great write, congratulations. Kai
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Date: 3/23/2017 4:23:00 AM
Thank you very much Kai, so pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support and encouragement, Roy. :))
Date: 3/22/2017 10:43:00 PM
Such a lovely scene, Roy! "Drinking coffee in rose-design robes, sounds so lovely! Those blue eyes with virtuous character! Congrats on your placement! :) Kim
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Date: 3/23/2017 4:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim for your very kind comment and the opportunity and placement in your competition most enjoyable, thanks again, Roy. :))
Date: 3/22/2017 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations Roy!! Well done! Such a romantic you are! :) Hugggs. Deb
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/23/2017 4:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Deborah for your very kind comment, I have adored my wife for over 30 years without a cross word and show her my appreciation when ever I can, thanks again, Roy. :))
Date: 3/8/2017 4:38:00 PM
Roy, I enjoyed reading your sweet, romantic poem! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/8/2017 5:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Kim for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this, thanks again, Roy.
Date: 3/7/2017 12:24:00 AM
This is so good....I imagined myself with my latte enjoying the sun and those eyes! A 7 as always.
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/7/2017 6:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Elizabeth, so pleased you liked this poem, and thanks for awarding it a 7, you are so generous, thanks again, Roy. :)
Date: 3/6/2017 7:32:00 PM
I love it! Good luck in the contest and all else! CayCay
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/7/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thank you very much CayCay for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this, much appreciated, thanks again, Roy.
Date: 3/5/2017 4:14:00 AM
- A beautiful place with romance and love - Beautifully written, Roy - Happy Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/5/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise your kindness is much appreciated, Wishing you and yours a happy Sunday too, Roy.

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