Precious Moment

The moment was etched upon the window of my mind
With a precious memory worthy of a ring setting
The clarity of that, that single event
Cut the timeline between her childhood
And a brilliant future
“Pedal, honey, pedal!  You got this!”
Move over diamond


June 11, 2023
A Diamond of Time Contest
Sponsored by Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Romios Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 7:51 PM
I want to respond, nut I donot get this.Help! Pangie.
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June 30, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Thank you for bringing open communication with me. This helps me understand you better. You are a big plus in my book.. but I think you will really know that:) Pangie in 113 degree heat.how?
Fisher Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 5:16 PM
Thanks Pangie for responding to my poems. This was a fictional story for that diamond of time contest: a daughter just learning how to ride her bike. Most of my stuff is made up except when I'm ticked off by the plandemic or general grifter tyranny.
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