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Precious Moment

The moment was etched upon the window of my mind With a precious memory worthy of a ring setting The clarity of that, that single event Cut the timeline between her childhood And a brilliant future “Pedal, honey, pedal! You got this!” Move over diamond June 11, 2023 A Diamond of Time Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/29/2023 7:51:00 PM

I want to respond, nut I donot get this.Help! Pangie.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/30/2023 7:00:00 PM

Thank you for bringing open communication with me. This helps me understand you better. You are a big plus in my book.. but I think you will really know that:) Pangie in 113 degree heat.how?

David Fisher
Date: 6/30/2023 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Pangie for responding to my poems. This was a fictional story for that diamond of time contest: a daughter just learning how to ride her bike. Most of my stuff is made up except when I'm ticked off by the plandemic or general grifter tyranny.