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Baby sleeps at her breast These intimate moments stay in a mother’s memory always contest: Sara Kendrick - Cinquain Contest 06~08~15

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Date: 5/6/2021 3:04:00 PM
Jan, this is so sweet! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:36:00 PM
Very expressive entry..I enjoyed reading it..Lovely picture to go with it..Thanks for your participation in my contest..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:38:00 PM
Thanks for a great contest Sara:-) This poem means a lot to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/12/2015 11:29:00 AM
Pleased to come back to revisit this precious memory; congratulations on your winning entry, Jan! Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul this is a special poem to me for obvious reasons! :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2015 11:55:00 PM
Congrats, Jan. One of the best!
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:14:00 AM
I was really pleased with it Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2015 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:13:00 AM
Thanks Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2015 3:50:00 PM
Jan, Congratulations........ SKAT
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Date: 6/11/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thank you for the congratulatory comment and congrats on your beautiful cinquain poem.
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Date: 6/11/2015 2:10:00 PM
thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2015 2:00:00 PM
Jan, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/11/2015 2:05:00 PM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/10/2015 9:42:00 PM
How true, Jan! A lovely cinquain! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:36:00 AM
Thanks so much for dropping by i do appreciate your support Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/10/2015 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations lovely and oh so true...
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:36:00 AM
Thanks Judy I am really pleased with this one - will show it to david one day when he is back from uni:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 6/10/2015 6:37:00 PM
Back with my congratulations for your win, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:39:00 PM
Thanks Sandra I will read the winning poems tomorrow:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/10/2015 6:21:00 PM
Precious moments last forever...Congrats on a great win Jan
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:27:00 PM
Thanks for being the bearer of good news Joseph:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 6/10/2015 5:24:00 PM
Lovely Cinquain, Jan. Yes, these memories are etched forever. GL in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks - yes something I will never ever forget:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/9/2015 6:49:00 PM
Jan, you have described the most precious of memories beautifully. I love this! Hugs
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Date: 6/9/2015 6:51:00 PM
Thanks so much Cecilia - I hope Sara likes it too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/9/2015 3:54:00 PM
ohhhh....so precious!! good luck in contest!
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Date: 6/9/2015 3:56:00 PM
thanks Thomas and thanks for the placement in your last contest:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 6/9/2015 3:43:00 PM
Lovely beautiful memories, and yes the do for each child.
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Date: 6/9/2015 3:45:00 PM
I was so pleased with the way this turned out Janet I do hope Sara likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/9/2015 10:51:00 AM
Your words capture the warmth of a touching moment and shares it with us all. Emile. #7
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Date: 6/9/2015 10:55:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Emile:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2015 7:37:00 PM
Hi Jan I was moved by the photo, and your poem Precious memories of motherhood. I love seeing that precious baby lying on the mother chest. I love your poetry format, your message was sweet god bless you. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Date: 6/9/2015 1:05:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Jade - motherhood and those memories - oh so precious:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2015 5:24:00 PM
How very lovely! a contented mother & baby poem, Jan! Sara will love it! Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:43:00 PM
I hope she does Paul it makes me feel quite emotional every time I read it - these memories are so so precious! hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2015 3:43:00 PM
Tender thoughts. Touching.
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:13:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by James I do appreciate your comment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2015 3:37:00 PM
this one is a SURE winner, Jan!!! so sweet.
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:12:00 PM
I can only cross my fingers and hope Sara likes it Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2015 2:52:00 PM
You've woven a very beautiful picture of the love between a mother and her baby, Jan! Excellent cinquain :)
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/8/2015 12:45:00 PM
This is a beauty Jan, all the best for Sara's contest with this gem ;)
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Date: 6/8/2015 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Wilma I do hope Sara likes it - I was so pleased with the way it turned out in the end:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2015 8:59:00 AM
I like the delicate lines of your cinquain, Jan. It's a feeling any mom can relate to. 7. Hugs! :-)
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Date: 6/8/2015 11:40:00 AM
Motherhood - the best thing ever to happen to me! Hugs jan xx
Date: 6/8/2015 8:20:00 AM
So very true, you even forget the pain you went through labor, a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 6/8/2015 11:39:00 AM
It pales into insignificance when you hold your precious baby - my favourite time was after I fed him and he fell asleep on my chest - the closeness you have cannot be described :-) Hugs jan xx

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