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Precious Memories of Motherhood

Baby
sleeps at her breast
These intimate moments
stay in a mother’s memory
always

contest: Sara Kendrick - Cinquain Contest
06~08~15

babymemorymothercinquain

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Kim Merryman

May 6, 2021 at 3:04 PM

Jan, this is so sweet! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick

June 12, 2015 at 3:36 PM

Very expressive entry..I enjoyed reading it..Lovely picture to go with it..Thanks for your participation in my contest..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

June 12, 2015 at 3:38 PM

Thanks for a great contest Sara:-) This poem means a lot to me:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

June 12, 2015 at 11:29 AM

Pleased to come back to revisit this precious memory; congratulations on your winning entry, Jan! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

June 12, 2015 at 3:37 PM

Thanks so much Paul this is a special poem to me for obvious reasons! :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2015 at 11:55 PM

Congrats, Jan. One of the best!

Jan Allison

June 12, 2015 at 12:14 AM

I was really pleased with it Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

June 11, 2015 at 5:17 PM

Congratulations on your win, hugs dear friend Eve

Jan Allison

June 12, 2015 at 12:13 AM

Thanks Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

June 11, 2015 at 3:50 PM

Jan, Congratulations........ SKAT

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 4:08 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

M.N.I.W M.N.I.W

June 11, 2015 at 2:02 PM

Thank you for the congratulatory comment and congrats on your beautiful cinquain poem.

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 2:10 PM

thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2015 at 2:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 2:05 PM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

June 10, 2015 at 9:42 PM

How true, Jan! A lovely cinquain! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 1:36 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by i do appreciate your support Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

June 10, 2015 at 8:41 PM

Congratulations lovely and oh so true...

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 1:36 AM

Thanks Judy I am really pleased with this one - will show it to david one day when he is back from uni:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

June 10, 2015 at 6:37 PM

Back with my congratulations for your win, Jan! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

June 10, 2015 at 6:39 PM

Thanks Sandra I will read the winning poems tomorrow:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

June 10, 2015 at 6:21 PM

Precious moments last forever...Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison

June 10, 2015 at 6:27 PM

Thanks for being the bearer of good news Joseph:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

June 10, 2015 at 5:24 PM

Lovely Cinquain, Jan. Yes, these memories are etched forever. GL in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

June 10, 2015 at 5:34 PM

Thanks - yes something I will never ever forget:-) hugs Jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane

June 9, 2015 at 6:49 PM

Jan, you have described the most precious of memories beautifully. I love this! Hugs

Jan Allison

June 9, 2015 at 6:51 PM

Thanks so much Cecilia - I hope Sara likes it too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Thomas Martin

June 9, 2015 at 3:54 PM

ohhhh....so precious!! good luck in contest!

Jan Allison

June 9, 2015 at 3:56 PM

thanks Thomas and thanks for the placement in your last contest:-) Hugs jan x

Jaycee Cervenka

June 9, 2015 at 3:43 PM

Lovely beautiful memories, and yes the do for each child.

Jan Allison

June 9, 2015 at 3:45 PM

I was so pleased with the way this turned out Janet I do hope Sara likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

June 9, 2015 at 10:51 AM

Your words capture the warmth of a touching moment and shares it with us all. Emile. #7

Jan Allison

June 9, 2015 at 10:55 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Emile:-) Hugs Jan xx

Patricia Opel Jaye

June 8, 2015 at 7:37 PM

Hi Jan I was moved by the photo, and your poem Precious memories of motherhood. I love seeing that precious baby lying on the mother chest. I love your poetry format, your message was sweet god bless you. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

Jan Allison

June 9, 2015 at 1:05 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Jade - motherhood and those memories - oh so precious:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

June 8, 2015 at 5:24 PM

How very lovely! a contented mother & baby poem, Jan! Sara will love it! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

June 8, 2015 at 5:43 PM

I hope she does Paul it makes me feel quite emotional every time I read it - these memories are so so precious! hugs Jan xx

James Tate

June 8, 2015 at 3:43 PM

Tender thoughts. Touching.

Jan Allison

June 8, 2015 at 5:13 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by James I do appreciate your comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

June 8, 2015 at 3:37 PM

this one is a SURE winner, Jan!!! so sweet.

Jan Allison

June 8, 2015 at 5:12 PM

I can only cross my fingers and hope Sara likes it Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

June 8, 2015 at 2:52 PM

You've woven a very beautiful picture of the love between a mother and her baby, Jan! Excellent cinquain :)

Jan Allison

June 8, 2015 at 5:11 PM

Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs jan xx

Wilma Neels

June 8, 2015 at 12:45 PM

This is a beauty Jan, all the best for Sara's contest with this gem ;)

Jan Allison

June 8, 2015 at 12:54 PM

Thanks Wilma I do hope Sara likes it - I was so pleased with the way it turned out in the end:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

June 8, 2015 at 8:59 AM

I like the delicate lines of your cinquain, Jan. It's a feeling any mom can relate to. 7. Hugs! :-)

Jan Allison

June 8, 2015 at 11:40 AM

Motherhood - the best thing ever to happen to me! Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

June 8, 2015 at 8:20 AM

So very true, you even forget the pain you went through labor, a 7 hugs eve

Jan Allison

June 8, 2015 at 11:39 AM

It pales into insignificance when you hold your precious baby - my favourite time was after I fed him and he fell asleep on my chest - the closeness you have cannot be described :-) Hugs jan xx

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