Len Gasun Poet Sonnet

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Precious Matrimonial Crystals

Words lovely flow in a pellucid stream
Holding both her hands, their eyes meet with gleam
Oath is so clear to love her forever
Star glides down her heart, is she a dreamer?

He gives her roses with whitest petals
Witnesses muster transparent portals
Blessings they bestow...he takes their full trust
With all their wishes that his love will last.

She’s a crystal  who’ll be handled with care
Crystals mustn’t fall from eyes in despair
They’ve heard all his sincere words so clearly
They hand her over to him willingly.

When words are crystals they remain in heart,
Kept far behind her eyes when she isn’t hurt.






©2012Leonora Galinta
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March 17, 2014    1.10 pm






Second Place
Contest: Any Poem Goes #14
Judged: 3/29/14
Sponsor: My greatest poet/sis PD

First Place
Contest: Impress Me with Small Poem written on Feb/March 2014
Judged: 3/22/14
Sponsor: Poet Giorgio V.

Third Place
Contest: Metaphor: Crystal
Judged: 3/18/2014
Sponsor: Poet Nette Onclaud


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Poet Destroyer A April 9, 2014 at 3:20 AM Hi Leo, are you up right now... I'm wide awake right now.... LOL,, stopping by to check if you have a new pome. I also want to thank you so much for the phone call.... Sending hugs... forever my friend... Linda Len Gasun April 13, 2014 at 9:32 AM Hi, my dearest sis & bff! Biggest hugs! I'm sorry if I just read and replied on your comment now. You're welcome about the call my dearest sis. Sending many hugs! I hope you & your family are doing well always. About a new poem, well, i was so busy this week. I'll see if i can post one soon but probably an old poem of mine for the meantime. TYTYTYSSM again. Hugs & kisses!

Bukang Liwayway March 31, 2014 at 8:19 AM This lovely poem deserves to win. Congratulations on your win my dear friend. Cheers!! God bless Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:12 PM Thank u so much my dear friend Maria. Cheers on your wins as well! so sorry, if didn't find so much time to go to winning lists. However, congrats again to ur win in my latest contest. I'll be giving more time there on longer vacation. Thank u so much for your support. in my contest. Cheers and God bless u & your family! Biggest hugs!

Scott Thirtyseven March 29, 2014 at 10:25 PM Beautiful, a most worthy winner. Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:13 PM Oh, I'm flattered but thank you so much for your very encouraging comments my very dear friend scott. Biggest hugs!

Skat A March 29, 2014 at 4:07 PM Hi Leonora, it's nice seeing this one on the winning list again... hugs ~ SKAT ~ Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:15 PM Thank u ever so much my dearest Skat! Many, many jumbo sweetest hugs to u from me! More blessings!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 29, 2014 at 11:11 AM Beautiful and heartfelt ! Leonora that's a well deserved win ! Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:18 PM Thank u so much my dear friend Dr. Upma. Biggest hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 29, 2014 at 11:08 AM Beautiful and heartfelt ! Leonora that's a well deserved win ! Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:16 PM Thank u so much my dear friend Dr. Upma. Biggest hugs!

Olusegun Arowolo March 29, 2014 at 11:08 AM Beautiful and wonderful write , Leonora.. Congrats on your superb win.... Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:30 PM Thank u so much for your very encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear friend Olusequn! Biggest hugs!

Paul Callus March 29, 2014 at 10:32 AM Back again to confirm what I said before...and congrats once more :) // paul Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:32 PM Thank u ever so much my dear friend Paul. More blessings! I'll visit your poetry soon. Biggestt hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 29, 2014 at 2:24 AM Well constructed and penned poem. Congrats on a fine win, leo Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:33 PM Thank u so much for your very encouraging comments and congratulatory greetngs my dear friend Dr. Ram.

Verlena S. Walker March 29, 2014 at 12:58 AM Beautiful! Congratulations on your win Leonora... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2014 at 12:38 AM Hi Leo, thank you for the awesome visit and this lovely write my sweet BFF.. Congratulations! Thank you for the support. Enjoy my latest blog if you like. It's called "Lunatics On The Loose." Stay tuned, I'll have a new contest coming up in a few days. Always & Forever ~ hugs and love LINDA~ Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:37 PM You're much welcome my loving sis & BFF. Thank u so much as well for appreciating my poem and the awesome win! More blessings! love u! Biggest hugs & lovely smiles!

Kim Merryman March 25, 2014 at 12:11 PM Leonora, congrats on your wonderful 1st place win! Love, Kim Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 4:38 PM Thank u so much my dear friend Kim! Biggest hugs!

Christopher Thor Britt March 23, 2014 at 10:57 PM Beautiful poem, Leonora. Beautiful win. Grats! /l\ Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:41 AM TYSM my dear friend Christopher.

Dr.Ram Mehta March 23, 2014 at 9:06 PM Congratulations on a fine win with this awesome poem, leo Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:44 AM TYSM my dear friend Dr. Ram.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 23, 2014 at 12:10 PM lovely xx Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:45 AM TYSM my dear friend.

Carrie Richards March 22, 2014 at 5:47 PM Oh yes......I remember this beauty !! A second time a winner !! Good for you !!! Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:46 AM ;)TYSM again my dear Carrie.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2014 at 2:43 PM - Leonora, congratulations on your fine winning poem in the contest: "February or March 2014 Poem" / / / / Sponsored by: Giorgio A. V. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:48 AM TYSM my dear friend Anne.

Paul Callus March 22, 2014 at 2:28 PM And a winner once again! Congrats :) // paul Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:49 AM ;)TYSM again my dear friend.

Verlena S. Walker March 22, 2014 at 2:01 PM Beautiful Leonora.. Congratulations on your first place win... Verlena Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:50 AM TYSM my dear friend Verlena.

Bukang Liwayway March 22, 2014 at 12:26 PM Very Creative and lovely poem my dear friend Leonora ;) two thumbs up for this. Hugssss and God bless you always ;) Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:52 AM TYSM my dear friend Maria. God bless u as well.

Ralph Sergi March 20, 2014 at 11:57 AM Hi Leonora, a pleasure to know you. Belated congratulations on your win. Thank you for your comment on Mom. May I ask what your first language is? Len Gasun March 21, 2014 at 5:21 AM Thank u so much my dear friend Ralph. A pleasure to know you as well. My first language is Filipin, hails from my country of origin. Again, TYSM

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2014 at 11:48 PM oh wonderful. here is a new poem right HERE. And I see it won in the contest. Congrats to you, sweetie Len Gasun March 20, 2014 at 4:56 AM TYSM my very dear friend Andrea.

Carrie Richards March 19, 2014 at 5:05 PM Thank you so much, dear Leonora....I am so honored to be among the winners in you Mommy contest. And this, dear, is just a lovely sonnet, it glistens like the crystals of which you speak...just smooth as silk ! Thank you again! Len Gasun March 20, 2014 at 5:03 AM You're much welcome my dear friend Carrie. Thanks a lot for the nice comments as well. Hugs!

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2014 at 4:34 PM Thank you my loving, sweet sis and BFF, your comments filled my day with smiles.. :) Congratulations, with your winning poem in "Nette O's CRYSTAL: metaphoric, contest." Love ya, Leo.... xoxoxox ~LINDA Len Gasun March 20, 2014 at 5:08 AM You're much welcome my loving sis & BFF. You also filled my day & time today with smiles upon hearing from you. Forever thanks for the great experiences, your inspirations, encouragement, support, friendship & many to mention. More blessings & happiness in your life my everdearest sis! Huge sweetest hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 18, 2014 at 11:12 PM Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, leo Len Gasun March 19, 2014 at 1:20 PM TYSM my dear friend Dr. Ram.

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