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Precious Gems Ninette For Contest

True friends are so precious like diamonds. Always treasure them! They’ll support you every day of your life Contest:-Ninette Sponsored by Silent One 10~09~15
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Bhurani Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 7:32 AM
rich poem rich in meaning
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Thanks Rizwana:-) hugs Jan xx
Guzzi Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 8:08 PM
So nice to read your writing this evening, belated congrads! Light & Love
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 1:33 AM
Thanks Debbie - it's lovely to see you:-) I'm sure you are busy with your book promotion - hope it's going well:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 8:12 PM
big congrats, jan. as you can see, I am finally trying to see winner lists. but now I need to hurry and get dinner going. I better forget the rest of this list and get to my remaining comments!
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 2:16 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:18 PM
Jan, Congratulations on your "Ninette Win." Love SKAT
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Wonderful take Jan n a superb win! Big congrats!
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Back again to read your poem and congratulate you on your fine win, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Thanks Sandra I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 8:04 AM
So true Jan, congrats on your win. A true friend is precious but unlike a diamond, very hard to find. Well done
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Thanks Greg:-) hugs jan xx
Cwiak Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Truer words could not have been written. Kudos on the win, Jan.
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Having been through the worst period in my life I know the benefit of true friends who have supported me through thick and thin good times and bad:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Sweet, perfect and true. I need to check out this contest, must be fairly new. Great write, Jan ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:55 PM
Thanks CayCay I know I would never have got through the recent trauma's in my life without the support of amazing friends -especially one's on soup who have helped me so so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Nice one Jan, should do well in the contest. I still haven't taken a run at this form yet.
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 1:22 PM
I may have written one before but it's not a form I'm that au fait with:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Jan, I enjoyed your piece very much. I agree true friends are to be cherished. Great job. I'm sure l'll see this gem on the winner's list. Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Thanks Alexis - the past 18 months have taught me so so much and I now know who i can rely on to support me when times get tough:-) hugs Jan xx
Beaufort Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Yes, you are a gem! That can last and last. So, it's like the title of the 007 film--Diamonds are Forever! I sometimes wonder how long people will look at these creations. The web site is a treasure of the mood of poets as the days go. You have no idea how I look forward to reading your work and hearing from you!! Thanks always!
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 8:47 AM
I can write happy when I'm sad and vice versa I have no idea where this creativity comes from - if it hadn't been for my hubby's cancer surgery I probably would never have started writing - yet here I am and it has helping me through the most traumatic period of my life. I'm SO glad you enjoy my poems Duke that comment has made my day:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:12 AM
I have never written one of these...they don't look easy, yet yours flows evenly and expresses the true meaning of friendship Superb Jan! Best of luck in the contest! #7
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Connie I really enjoyed this challenge I don't think I've written on before and the contests do stretch out creative abilities:-) hugs Jan xx
Fox Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Beautiful <3
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Aww thanks Serenity and I love the new avatar:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 4:24 PM
A diamond is forever...so is a true, loyal friend. gl in the contest with this lovely Ninette! Hugs // paul
Callus Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Looking forward to it:) hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Paul i have made some real gems of friends on here and am say glad that you are one of them:-) I'll see you again really soon:-) :-) hugs Jan xxx
Trifiatis Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 4:28 AM
A sparkling like diamond Ninette, dear Jean! Good luck!
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 5:39 AM
Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 8:51 PM
This time I can say the poem is a real gem, and well, voila! It Is!!!!
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 5:39 AM
aww thanks Arthur and you are a real gem too:-) hugs jan xx
Martin Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Good luck in contest, Jan! Enjoyed immensely.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Thanks so much Thomas:-) I hope Silent One likes my poem:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:31 PM
awesome that you did it on friends. WEll played!!
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Was thinking of the journey Daz and I have been on and this just flowed:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Lovely thought in your Ninette, Jan, and very true. All the best in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:49 PM
Thanks Sandra I enjoyed this writing in this form for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Enjoyed reading your friendship poem..The diamond shape expresses the gem that a friend can be..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Thanks Sara - I may work on the second line so it look more like a real diamond shape:-) hugs Jan xx
Cheema Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Hi Jan! I'm stopping by to learn what a ninette is and after glancing at your ninette and a few more, I think it is possible. I agree, friendship is a real trasure. Good luck! Love, Balveen
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 2:58 PM
I've only written one myself Balveen I got a second place for it - best place to look at the form is on shadow poetry - I find it is more accurate on 'forms' than the poetry soup site:-) hugs jan xx
Cheema Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Thanks for the encouragement. I've posted it.Jan could you guide me or send me a link to learn how to write a haibun, please? Thanks and love, Balveen
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 1:40 PM
Give it a go it's a simple but effective form:-) hugs Jan xx
Romaine Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 10:54 AM
Hey Jan, stopped by for a visit. A lovely tribute to a precious relationship. A lifetime of treasured experiences in so few words. Best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 11:22 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Neva:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Beautiful....Hello Hallmark, I have this poem you will love....Congratulations on your first place win!!
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Would be lovely to get that onto a greetings card Tim -hope someone is reading ... then again as we both know people just nick our work and claim it as their own:-( hugs Jan xx
Sundman Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Such sweet words in such short words.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Gabriel having been through the most traumatic time in my life over the last 18 months or so I am so lucky to have amazing friends in my life - its at times like this you know who will really be there for you:-) hugs Jan xx
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