Precious

Precious Oyster unfolds Revealing a unique Perfected pearl of sapphire blue As memories of you lie deep within A hidden treasure of the past Concealed in my soft heart A flawless love Precious © Kim van Breda- 20 October 2014

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/26/2014 4:52:00 AM

A really lovely poem multilayered open to two distinct interpretations. One or the other and all the blends of both. I love the image of your heart as the oyster and the pearl as your romantic memory of a lover. I also love the pear being sapphire blue like the oceans from which they originate.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/25/2014 6:29:00 AM

Memories can be hidden like in a shell is true, Kim..;) Excellent rictameter! Love and light! xxx D.

Kim Van Breda
Date: 10/25/2014 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Dorian I love Oysters, and I love Pearls...the thought of a Sapphire Pearl intrigued me. A memory of sharing Oysters and Champagne on a beach with someone special under a sapphire sky inspired this write.