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precariously hangs fully dressed oak limb.... black birds run across lawn

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Date: 10/6/2021 12:40:00 AM
Mainly starlings looking for grubs Sara on my lawn
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2021 4:19:00 AM
Brian, We have some starlings here but mostly in the spring flocks of blackbirds land in our front yard and feed on fall's crop of acorns, bugs and worms. The limb that was there on the oak fell to the ground during all this rain. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 5/28/2021 11:19:00 AM
Wonderfully vivid, Sara, so skillfully expressed!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2021 4:13:00 AM
Michelle, Thanks for the review of my work and taking time to leave me a comment. Sara
Date: 5/21/2021 4:23:00 PM
I see this clearly... excellent words and imagery... Ann
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2021 4:09:00 AM
Thank you, Ann. I am glad I portray a good picture. Sara
Date: 5/20/2021 7:22:00 AM
Love the image Sara, I hope you are well. Tom
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2021 2:23:00 PM
Tom, Thanks for your visit and for your concern about my well being. I am doing okay. Sara
Date: 5/20/2021 6:20:00 AM
Very vivid imagery, Ms Sara. Hoping you are well.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2021 2:14:00 PM
Daniel, I am slowly getting better from whatever infection I have had and I am feeling better about losing our precious Chihuahua. Thank you for dropping by and for your concern and kind review. Sara
Date: 5/20/2021 5:53:00 AM
Hi Sara, You have written a good Monoku. Have a wonderful day :-) Alexis
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Date: 5/20/2021 7:51:00 AM
Alexis, I hope it is a good day and it is taking up shape to be one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 5/20/2021 5:50:00 AM
A perfect haiku. You can write these excellently.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2021 7:48:00 AM
Victor, Ahhh!! Thank you. Sara

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