Precariously

precariously

hangs fully dressed oak limb....
              
                 black birds run across lawn

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Brian Strand

October 6, 2021 at 12:40 AM

Mainly starlings looking for grubs Sara on my lawn

Sara Kendrick

October 6, 2021 at 4:19 AM

Brian, We have some starlings here but mostly in the spring flocks of blackbirds land in our front yard and feed on fall's crop of acorns, bugs and worms. The limb that was there on the oak fell to the ground during all this rain. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

May 28, 2021 at 11:19 AM

Wonderfully vivid, Sara, so skillfully expressed!

Sara Kendrick

October 6, 2021 at 4:13 AM

Michelle, Thanks for the review of my work and taking time to leave me a comment. Sara

Ann Foster

May 21, 2021 at 4:23 PM

I see this clearly... excellent words and imagery... Ann

Sara Kendrick

October 6, 2021 at 4:09 AM

Thank you, Ann. I am glad I portray a good picture. Sara

Tom Cunningham

May 20, 2021 at 7:22 AM

Love the image Sara, I hope you are well. Tom

Sara Kendrick

May 20, 2021 at 2:23 PM

Tom, Thanks for your visit and for your concern about my well being. I am doing okay. Sara

Daniel Turner

May 20, 2021 at 6:20 AM

Very vivid imagery, Ms Sara. Hoping you are well.

Sara Kendrick

May 20, 2021 at 2:14 PM

Daniel, I am slowly getting better from whatever infection I have had and I am feeling better about losing our precious Chihuahua. Thank you for dropping by and for your concern and kind review. Sara