Precariously

precariously

hangs fully dressed oak limb....
              
                 black birds run across lawn

naturehaiku

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Brian Strand

Date: 10/6/2021 12:40:00 AM

Mainly starlings looking for grubs Sara on my lawn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2021 4:19:00 AM

Brian, We have some starlings here but mostly in the spring flocks of blackbirds land in our front yard and feed on fall's crop of acorns, bugs and worms. The limb that was there on the oak fell to the ground during all this rain. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/28/2021 11:19:00 AM

Wonderfully vivid, Sara, so skillfully expressed!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2021 4:13:00 AM

Michelle, Thanks for the review of my work and taking time to leave me a comment. Sara

Ann Foster

Date: 5/21/2021 4:23:00 PM

I see this clearly... excellent words and imagery... Ann

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2021 4:09:00 AM

Thank you, Ann. I am glad I portray a good picture. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/20/2021 7:22:00 AM

Love the image Sara, I hope you are well. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2021 2:23:00 PM

Tom, Thanks for your visit and for your concern about my well being. I am doing okay. Sara

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/20/2021 6:20:00 AM

Very vivid imagery, Ms Sara. Hoping you are well.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2021 2:14:00 PM

Daniel, I am slowly getting better from whatever infection I have had and I am feeling better about losing our precious Chihuahua. Thank you for dropping by and for your concern and kind review. Sara