Praying Mantis
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focused praying mantis still as a stick
clueless prey three times its size
best friend of gardeners
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Poetry notes:
10/13/2019
Poetry form: Kimo - An Israeli form of haiku that has three lines with a 10-7-6 syllable format and which does not rhyme. Also, the Kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it's uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
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focused praying mantis still as a stick
clueless prey three times its size
best friend of gardeners
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October 13, 2019
F F I series 27 kimo
Brian Strand, sponsor
Copyright © Mark Toney | Year Posted 2019
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