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Prayer - Ziket

plea for fruition of wants
God or servant?

3rd position in ziket contest

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Sigrid Ermine

August 18, 2020 at 6:06 PM

We're all servants under God. Precise sentiment.

Rama Balasubramanian

August 19, 2020 at 3:49 AM

But we keep giving him innumerable tasks, always asking for something. If we have love and faith, we would stop praying for fulfillment of wishes.. Thanks for reading and commenting. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

August 18, 2020 at 3:48 PM

Nicely done! Congrats to you.

Rama Balasubramanian

August 19, 2020 at 3:51 AM

Your appreciation makes my day. Thanks and congratulations to you too. God bless you.

Jan Allison

August 18, 2020 at 2:38 PM

well penned Rama congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian

August 19, 2020 at 3:54 AM

Your appreciation makes my day. Thanks and congratulations to you too. You said so much in just two lines . I would have surely given you a top win. God bless you.