Notes About The Poem

- Prayer For Reflection -

The crown of thorns
   A prayer to no avail
              God sacrificed his son -
              the most precious thing in life
   Suffering
   - with death as a consequence

   Crucified
   - silent spectator at the cross
   tears are soundless

              When things become wrong -
              we cannot ignore the action

   There is a humble
   rift in the dark
   Forgiveness _____
   - lead us home




   03.02.2023
   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
   Copyright © All Rights Reserved

   Contest No 1180
   Sponsored by: Brian Strand
   3rd place in the contest


  Easter Poetry Contest
  Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh
  4rd place in the contest
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Back with Congratulations on your New win. I love this write/story/picture. Hugs...  "Happy Easter" with blessings...................
Congratulations on your win in the Contest, Wonderful poem... Happy Easter.
George Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 4:28 AM
Behind Resurrection, there is pain and death. He brought us life through death and pain. Glory be to our Lord! Well done Smile..... Congratulations on your win. Hugs
Villalon Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:47 AM
There's no crown without a sacrifice... Your poem reflects your being. Thanks for sharing and reminding... Excuse me for my late CONGRATULATIONS... this poem is a PLUS to everybody! Cliff
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:01 AM
- Thank you very much, Cliff :) - hugs
Ashley Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, for your excellent win in Brian’s contest with your exquisite and prayerful poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Susan :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write/picture. Love It. Great for Easter. Hugs... Have a blessed day/week writing away................
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
George Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 8:49 PM
Congratulations Smile on your well deserved podium win ! Hugs and blessings !
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Our dear Savior shored up that rift.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Anne-Lise, your win is well-deserved. Pure wisdom, elegantly articulated in your lines. Congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Highly emotive, words dwelling in faith. Graceful, solemn poem.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs
George Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 5:27 AM
With the crown of thorns penetrating into his skull and the sharp nails piercing his hands and feet, how much He must have suffered.... all for his thankless children. When I contemplate on the agony of Jesus, I am moved to tears ! A touching poem and image, dear Smile. Stay blessed. Love and hugs!
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 4:30 AM
I saw a crown of thorns plant when we visited a place called Callaway Gardens. It was very much like the picture above on the plant. The pain He suffered for us was horrible, but He paid the price so we could be set free. His love is more than any human could express. Thank you for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. It reads like a winner for Brian's contest to me. Way to go. Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs
Horsman Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 6:45 PM
Yes the suffering on the cross, an innocent man, to whom threaten those in society with most to lose.. Your poem, is a sad reminder and needed Anne-Lise. Hope you are keeping well in that beautiful country of yours....Harry
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Harry :) - hugs
McBride  Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 12:41 PM
Amen, love it, sadly the world mostly still rejects Him, trying to kill off the spirit of Jesus deaths purpose as after Pentacost, but it's all in God's plan, they tried to stop the spirit then for fear of losing self praise but found out if it's of God it can't be stopped, bless you my friend, hugs : )
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:58 AM
- Thank you very much, Stephan :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 9:58 AM
A lovely reflection prayer Anne-Lise, we should never forget what Jesus did, died to save us all from sin… Belle
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 11:16 AM
- We hear daily about war, murder and terror, (nothing new under the sun ... ) ... we forget God's word and going our own ways ... indifference - Many thanks for your comment, Belle :) hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 9:05 AM
He suffered for all sins of mankind. If we do not profit from that suffering we are fools. A lovely spiritual poem, Anne Lise. Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 11:01 AM
- In our "crazy" world ... I can easily understand that many people doubt ... many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 8:30 AM
He died to save us from damnation yet many ignore the fact they can't say that they weren't warned. Good luck in the contest Anne and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 10:59 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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