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When therefore great Father Saint and our driver, us your reasons knowers will 
be saved? The world is changing I feel it in the water, I taste it  in the air on the 
moisture of  the ground, shades in the clearing of midday, whispers of horrible 
voices  echoing against the Stone. Drums crying and us inside the mine  drinking 
the  sulphur, the knife in the scabbard has spoken also two flowers  bent on the 
step of a trespasser. The black dog raised itself to us in the night, knowing that 
came the hour the last, it is time to give the blood and the sweat and the white 
tooth. Brother will cut brother in blow body with body looking at the blood as it 
rolls slowly from the rock' s head. The wheels of fortune turns. Crowned and 
cleaned with light the suntanned breasts and the hands, dark bodies wild 
embraced with glances sincere and comfort on there walk laughing. Our chariot 
driver, father, God Unknown! Unwrite what its written to be done  on this land of 
Heroes, gently I grasp they and hand you flakes of winter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/28/2014 5:49:00 AM
Once again I would like to thank you for your warm wellcome
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:56:00 PM
Dimitrios, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 7/21/2014 10:48:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dimitrios :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2014 10:27:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dimitrios. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:29:00 PM
Hello Dimitrios,,, Thank you for the comment on my comment. I am looking forward, in hearing from you again. You will enjoy this site, I guaranteed or my fun poetry name isn't PD :) I highly recommend the blog area, there you can read what is hot, and what is going on here at The Poetry Soup. If you like click on some of the side features ((-UNDER- the area where it reads "Member Poets/Poems")) to the left of this comment. -That's my favorite soup section. If you scroll down to where it reads "Contests" you will enjoy the "Contest Winners: Member " feature. Click away, and check out what's cooking. Enjoy reading and following, many of the incoming winners. "I SURE DO." Please feel free to comment and read any of my poems, if you'd like. My poems are not the easiest to understand:) I'm still learning myself. However, I enjoy encouraging others. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I might be able to help, if not I will recommend someone. Take Care~LINDA~
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Date: 7/16/2014 4:45:00 PM
Dimitrios, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Dimitrios Karagkounis
Date: 7/17/2014 4:34:00 AM
Thank you!!

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