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Prayer Petition Request Adoration Yak Examine Repent

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2018 8:35:00 AM

I think Yak ads a human touch and that it makes the experience personal. :0)

Bonnie House
Date: 7/12/2018 4:49:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. I wasn't sure if that was a good word to use. I was going to change it but I believe I will leave it.

Old Buck

Date: 7/11/2018 11:33:00 AM

Bonnie: Maybe "yak" could also be "yield" which is an important element in getting "good answers". But maybe that's just my experience. Keep them coming. oldbuck

Bonnie House
Date: 7/11/2018 10:47:00 PM

Thank you for your comments. I wasn't going to use yak but I looked it up and it means to talk so used it. It doesn't sound as good as your word but it was a case that it went in this verse. I think yield would be a better word.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 7/8/2018 8:14:00 AM

Ahh, Bonnie yet us pray for others then our self.. Thanks for sharing your gift. WRITE ON!! James

Bonnie House
Date: 7/8/2018 5:34:00 PM

Thank you for your comments.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 1:42:00 AM

Hi Bonnie.. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your well crafted write this evening. I always appreciate the giftings of a pen in the hand of a poet!

Bonnie House
Date: 7/6/2018 10:35:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words. Much appreciated.