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December 26, 2023

"Good Wishes For My Enemy" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Wrote two poems on the same theme - one in rhyme (Only Good Wishes), this one in free verse.

Who is my enemy? Do I really know? Those who are waging a war to amass lands or wealth, or those who are depriving the downtrodden of food and shelter, which are the rights for every individual! From childhood, I was encompassed by love, and kindness, that was my blessings...in a humble surrounding! Father’s love, Mother’s affection, showered on me, kindness from neighbours! Sibling- rivalry? No, that didn’t hurt or destroy my life! Who are my enemies? Those who competed for excellence in school? Or who never congratulated me on my success! Negative thoughts, despair, jealousy - are those our enemies! Enmity couldn't crush my determination to reach a destination. Sometimes I blame the war-torn situation, which caused my parents to suffer miserably! But my mother, who embodied kindness and empathy, taught me to hate the hatred, imbibe the inner peace she exemplified! So on this day, even when being crushed by disharmony and discord... war, hunger, poverty, racism in the world, I feel truly peaceful and embrace acceptance about my own hopes, successes and failures. I wish happiness for whoever loved me, appreciated me, or who did not… I wish them peace, the way I have been blessed! I pray for absolute Harmony on the planet, Our own Earth! Pray for a serene dawn when sun rises to wipe out all darkness.

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Date: 1/7/2024 9:50:00 AM
Wonderful and well deserved win for you here, dear Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/7/2024 10:05:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Your encouraging comment is very much appreciated!
Date: 1/6/2024 2:22:00 PM
This was epic.. Congratulations on your placement in the forgiveness contest.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/6/2024 2:37:00 PM
Wow! Your wonderful comment blew me away - hope I can learn poetic techniques from you - all your images are so unique….your kindness is so appreciated, SO!
Date: 1/4/2024 7:33:00 PM
"Negative thoughts, despair, jealousy - are those our enemies!" - Beautifully said. A thoroughly thought-about poem. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/6/2024 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Christuraj! I believe in harmony and peace, not in hatred! Your kind words are very much appreciated!
Date: 1/4/2024 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "Pray For Dawn" write/story again. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 1/6/2024 2:32:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. You are so kind - really appreciate!
Date: 1/3/2024 6:56:00 AM
your words hit home hard Malabika and rightly so. you are gracious to any one against you. The world would be a better place with more people like you hugs Shadow
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/3/2024 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet! Loved your beautiful, thoughtful words! My life was not as hard as many other people, I was protected from many harms - probably it was not so easy for them to be gracious! We will just pray for a better world!
Date: 12/28/2023 1:28:00 PM
WOW!!! I really enjoyed reading your creative "Pray For Dawn" write/story. Yes, say a prayer... "Happy New Year 2024" .................
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/28/2023 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. I very much agree with you. Let’s pray for a Happy and Healthy 2024.
Date: 12/27/2023 5:45:00 PM
Beautiful words; very wise and insightful! Appreciate your thoughts!
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Date: 12/27/2023 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Paige. Really appreciate your inspiring comment.
Date: 12/27/2023 3:37:00 PM
inspirational and wise words, Mala! For some reason I like the 2d one, it seems a bit more personal. Your mother sounds like a gem of a woman. My mother was the same way gifting me with the ability to claim inner peace even when those around me are acting frantic and crazy. A lovely poem, have to fave, hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/27/2023 3:43:00 PM
Dear Sara, Thank you for your feedback. I like to write free verse more than rhymes - I am really emotional, I can pour my heart in free verse. Once in a while I try rhyming poetry. Now I am deciding to enter this one for the contest. Dear Sara, I am so touched by your love and support! You and your husband - together an amazing couple! Appreciate the FAVE! Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 12/27/2023 3:37:00 PM
inspirational and wise words, Mala! For some reason I like the 2d one, it seems a bit more personal. Your mother sounds like a gem of a woman. My mother was the same way gifting me with the ability to claim inner peace even when those around me are acting frantic and crazy. A lovely poem, have to fave, hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/27/2023 12:14:00 PM
I loved both of your poems, but I think I prefer this one.. but I am not the contest judge lol... Amen my friend, I hope we achieve harmony on this earth..
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Date: 12/27/2023 12:38:00 PM
Thank you. Appreciate your feedback.

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