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December 26, 2023

"Good Wishes For My Enemy" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Wrote two poems on the same theme - one in rhyme (Only Good Wishes), this one in free verse.

Who is my enemy?
Do I really know? Those 
who are waging a war to amass
lands or wealth, or those who 
are depriving the downtrodden
of food and shelter, which are 
the rights for every individual!

From childhood, I was
encompassed by love,
and kindness, that was
my blessings...in a humble
surrounding!
Father’s love,
Mother’s affection,
showered on me,
kindness from
neighbours! Sibling-
rivalry? No, that didn’t
hurt or destroy my life!

Who are my
enemies? Those who
competed for excellence in school?
Or who never
congratulated me on my
success! Negative thoughts, 
despair, jealousy - are those our 
enemies! Enmity couldn't 
crush my determination to
reach a destination.  

Sometimes I blame the war-torn
situation, which caused my parents
to suffer miserably! But my mother, 
who embodied kindness
and empathy, taught me 
to hate the hatred, imbibe
the inner peace she 
exemplified!

So on this day, even
when being crushed by 
disharmony and discord...
war, hunger, poverty, racism in the
world, I feel truly peaceful and
embrace acceptance about
my own hopes, successes and
failures. I wish happiness
for whoever loved me,
appreciated me, or who did not…
I wish them peace,
the way I have been blessed!
I pray for absolute
Harmony on the planet, 
Our own Earth! Pray 
for a serene dawn when sun
rises to wipe out all darkness.

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Date: 1/7/2024 9:50:00 AM
Wonderful and well deserved win for you here, dear Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/7/2024 10:05:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Your encouraging comment is very much appreciated!
Date: 1/6/2024 2:22:00 PM
This was epic.. Congratulations on your placement in the forgiveness contest.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/6/2024 2:37:00 PM
Wow! Your wonderful comment blew me away - hope I can learn poetic techniques from you - all your images are so unique….your kindness is so appreciated, SO!
Date: 1/4/2024 7:33:00 PM
"Negative thoughts, despair, jealousy - are those our enemies!" - Beautifully said. A thoroughly thought-about poem. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/6/2024 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Christuraj! I believe in harmony and peace, not in hatred! Your kind words are very much appreciated!
Date: 1/4/2024 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "Pray For Dawn" write/story again. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/6/2024 2:32:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. You are so kind - really appreciate!
Date: 1/3/2024 6:56:00 AM
your words hit home hard Malabika and rightly so. you are gracious to any one against you. The world would be a better place with more people like you hugs Shadow
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/3/2024 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet! Loved your beautiful, thoughtful words! My life was not as hard as many other people, I was protected from many harms - probably it was not so easy for them to be gracious! We will just pray for a better world!
Date: 12/28/2023 1:28:00 PM
WOW!!! I really enjoyed reading your creative "Pray For Dawn" write/story. Yes, say a prayer... "Happy New Year 2024" .................
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/28/2023 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. I very much agree with you. Let’s pray for a Happy and Healthy 2024.
Date: 12/27/2023 5:45:00 PM
Beautiful words; very wise and insightful! Appreciate your thoughts!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/27/2023 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Paige. Really appreciate your inspiring comment.
Date: 12/27/2023 12:14:00 PM
I loved both of your poems, but I think I prefer this one.. but I am not the contest judge lol... Amen my friend, I hope we achieve harmony on this earth..
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Date: 12/27/2023 12:38:00 PM
Thank you. Appreciate your feedback.
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