Prankster Jack Frost

Jailed at home by a white, frozen world
Adorned by one unmindful Jack Frost.
Ceramic ice was recklessly hurled,
Kicking bitter, beast-winter across
Fields, woods, yards and modern built cities.
Rejoicing nature rules us as boss,
Offering risky snow trussed pretty.
Some people claim this day is a loss,
Taken by a prankster, Mister Frost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 12, 2015 at 2:57 PM
CAYCAY, Congratulations on your Jack Frost Acrostic. Love SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations CayCay.
Tor Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 1:27 AM
CayCay nice win!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Wonderful acrostic Caycay.. congrats on great win!
Roper Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Cay Cay!
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 4:20 PM
SNOW DAY!!!!!!!! Well done CayCay.
Cwiak Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Great Acrostic on this wintry write. (Brrrr) Congrats on the win and I hope you get a chance to read my MUSICALS PART II. ((HUGS))
Godwin Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Of course I'll be by and I'm grateful for the heads up. I have checked on you recently and wondered about you - so good to see you here. As always, I thank you ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Back to congratulate you on your nice win, CayCay! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Well done 3rd place well deserved.
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:02 AM
Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 8:30 AM
lovely poem CayCay congrats on 3rd place hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:52 PM
I love how you did yours with these succinct short lines, Caycay. One of the better Frost poems I have seen. Can't wait to hear your reply to my long emails. Almost time for me to get off here for the night. Adieu!
Callus Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 1:00 PM
Delightfully and cleverly expressed, CayCay. I like your poem, but I don't think I would say the same to Mr Frost:) Regards // paul
Godwin Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Thank you so much, Paul. All the best to you ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Very nicely done, CayCay. Your words definitely present the image of those lost winter days when Jack Frost rules and his heavy snow storms keep us jailed in like prisoners! Wishing you all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:19 PM
At least we don't have to tie a rope from our home to our barn! That was a reality for some people once. Thank you for your comments, Sandra. All the best ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 7:13 AM
A great acrostic CayCay love the imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 5:54 PM
I appreciate your comments so very much - thank you, Jan ... CayCay
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 6:57 AM
- Snow and frost is perfect for Christmas cards and poems :))) ..... A great poem, CayCay ! - I wish you good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Peace to you, as well, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for your uplifting comments ... CayCay
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