Prancing Horse

far in the distance 

under the moon ..hear my call 

in the darkness i 

reach the sky ..and stand up tall 

prancing horse .. full of joy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 7:09 PM
well done! Marco! jimbo
Shahwan Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 10:15 AM
Beautiful tanka. Smart stanza. Pls comment my poem-under rain...thankfully.
Moreno Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 1:22 PM
A vivid image comes to mind after reading this, lofe the "I reach the sky and stand up tall"...Raul
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