Prairie Pothole

Out here, wild rhubarb grows free,
Bitter beauty escapes designs by premiers
And presidents,
Red-veined leaves untouched by the
Denizens of this desert.
Morality endures despite the sins
Of man, mere miles away.
Asleep at last, my small pond releases
Crawlers, bent on surveying the usual haunts,
Where spirits descend to warn of
Bad tidings, if wandering too far from this oasis.
In the moonlight, a pothole party regales
The gathered, with song and dance from the faithful.
Wind spirits, twirling nearby, brush feathers, leaves and
Tentacles, with soothing echoes. Green Darners rocket about, flashing
Smoky emerald wings, while fireflies spark the dark night.
Out here, wild rhubarb grows free.



07//06/13
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Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 4:09 AM
Interesting work..I like the line wild rhubarb grows free..I only tried rhubarb once and was not too fond of it..I don't think it grows around here though..I enjoyed reading this one today..A very creative and unique work..Thanks for the viisit to my work..Your comments are encouraging..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 1:49 AM
you are so talented, James. What an artistic poem. Just don't see enough of you any more. Thanks. for your comment at my blog. I just now saw it That was a dilemma that I would not wish on anybody.
Chircop Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 10:30 AM
Fireflies spark the dark night-beautiful imagery.Hope all is fine in Minesota dear friend
Poet Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Just excellent James.Love the alliteration here.Thanks for visiting my poem page.
Onclaud Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 1:53 PM
rich and lush as nature should be, jimbo... this is a lively piece that endears... lovely work!..:) huggs
Ryerson Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 1:05 PM
Beautiful piece from a true child of nature Jimbo...Had the pleasure of hearing you and Marlon on Drake's show...You sound exactly like I thought you would...Nice to hear a voice to go with the face - Tim
Tacito Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 8:17 AM
A spectacular nature piece full of twists & turns. Stay awesome, Jimbo!
Jones Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Very descriptive way to describe the pond...I will always think of you and this phrase now when fishing in one :-)
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July 6, 2013 at 9:53 PM
I like the Prarie pot hole... wonderful imagery through and through... xox~ Linda
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