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Prairie Cathedral

Beholding great plains Angelic clouds serenade Steeple of the field ------------------------------------------ inspired by rauls contest "Inspiration in haiku"

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P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:23:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 11:03:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Abe >> James

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:12:00 PM

Heavenly Haiku Abe, another fine delight to read>>James

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/3/2009 2:02:00 PM

I am loving all the words that are in your haiku! Very nice!

Sue Mason

Date: 7/27/2009 1:41:00 PM

I think this is MY favorite ... smile ... love the steeple imagery. Great write, Abe! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2009 12:54:00 PM

Abe, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/25/2009 12:59:00 PM

this haiku is perfection! Abe!!! CONGRATS!!! jimbo

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 7/25/2009 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Abe. ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/25/2009 6:45:00 AM

What a lovely entry this poem was, and well deserving a win! Congratulations, Abe!! ~ Love, Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 7/25/2009 2:52:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/25/2009 2:05:00 AM

Abe, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Ed Coet

Date: 7/11/2009 3:19:00 PM

A truly superb haiku. I congratulate you on this one Abe. -ED-

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2009 12:42:00 PM

Great Haiku. I can just see the plains with the cloud floating over. Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/7/2009 11:20:00 AM

I love this new twist on Raul's contest! Has such a regal feel to it!! Best of luck, Abe!!

Sue Mason

Date: 7/2/2009 7:54:00 PM

This is perfect for that picture, Abe. Good luck in the contest. I can't seem to come up with anything yet ... smile ... thanks so much for all your comments on my writing. They are most welcome. Have a great 4th weekend!

Date: 7/2/2009 12:19:00 PM

Nice use of imagery with a creative view. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Raven Carr

Date: 7/2/2009 8:12:00 AM

great job!!!!!!that was a great inspiration!!!!!!!luv it....:-)

Veronica Joseph

Date: 7/2/2009 6:12:00 AM

this is so lovely, I can see the heat mirages rising to the clouds.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 7/2/2009 5:26:00 AM

One day I'd like to see the great plains, you make it sound like a spiritual experience

Brian Strand

Date: 7/2/2009 12:19:00 AM

I get the picture Abe,Nice .Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/1/2009 9:29:00 PM

Thanks for the support...Raul

Misty Penton-Leccese

Date: 7/1/2009 9:23:00 PM

Nicely done. Good luck to you also in the contest. Lots of Love, Misty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2009 9:17:00 PM

The reader gets such a welcome sense of serenity from the spiritual image you create in this work, Abe. Your writing is in a class of its own and I can't wait for your book to be released. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/1/2009 7:33:00 PM

Abe, I'm smilin!!! I really like this take on Raul's pic!!! I'm feelin' it! rock-on!!!! haiku dude!!! jimbo