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Prairie Cathedral


Beholding great plains
Angelic clouds serenade
Steeple of the field




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inspired by rauls contest "Inspiration in haiku"

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P Sheart

December 21, 2009 at 9:23 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

December 20, 2009 at 11:03 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Abe >> James

James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 1:12 PM

Heavenly Haiku Abe, another fine delight to read>>James

Brandee Augustus

August 3, 2009 at 2:02 PM

I am loving all the words that are in your haiku! Very nice!

Sue Mason

July 27, 2009 at 1:41 PM

I think this is MY favorite ... smile ... love the steeple imagery. Great write, Abe! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 27, 2009 at 12:54 PM

Abe, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

July 25, 2009 at 12:59 PM

this haiku is perfection! Abe!!! CONGRATS!!! jimbo

Trudy Diane Rider

July 25, 2009 at 10:19 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Abe. ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

July 25, 2009 at 6:45 AM

What a lovely entry this poem was, and well deserving a win! Congratulations, Abe!! ~ Love, Carrie

Brian Strand

July 25, 2009 at 2:52 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

July 25, 2009 at 2:05 AM

Abe, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Ed Coet

July 11, 2009 at 3:19 PM

A truly superb haiku. I congratulate you on this one Abe. -ED-

Sara Kendrick

July 11, 2009 at 12:42 PM

Great Haiku. I can just see the plains with the cloud floating over. Sara

Carrie Richards

July 7, 2009 at 11:20 AM

I love this new twist on Raul's contest! Has such a regal feel to it!! Best of luck, Abe!!

Sue Mason

July 2, 2009 at 7:54 PM

This is perfect for that picture, Abe. Good luck in the contest. I can't seem to come up with anything yet ... smile ... thanks so much for all your comments on my writing. They are most welcome. Have a great 4th weekend!

July 2, 2009 at 12:19 PM

Nice use of imagery with a creative view. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Raven Carr

July 2, 2009 at 8:12 AM

great job!!!!!!that was a great inspiration!!!!!!!luv it....:-)

Veronica Joseph

July 2, 2009 at 6:12 AM

this is so lovely, I can see the heat mirages rising to the clouds.

Laurie Ginn

July 2, 2009 at 5:26 AM

One day I'd like to see the great plains, you make it sound like a spiritual experience

Brian Strand

July 2, 2009 at 12:19 AM

I get the picture Abe,Nice .Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

July 1, 2009 at 9:29 PM

Thanks for the support...Raul

Misty Penton-Leccese

July 1, 2009 at 9:23 PM

Nicely done. Good luck to you also in the contest. Lots of Love, Misty

Carolyn Devonshire

July 1, 2009 at 9:17 PM

The reader gets such a welcome sense of serenity from the spiritual image you create in this work, Abe. Your writing is in a class of its own and I can't wait for your book to be released. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

July 1, 2009 at 7:33 PM

Abe, I'm smilin!!! I really like this take on Raul's pic!!! I'm feelin' it! rock-on!!!! haiku dude!!! jimbo

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