Practically Insane

I'm practically insane...


Sipping on an empty hope

Swallowing an empty dream

Wandering in an empty thought

Tempted in an empty lust


I'm practically insane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 31, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Thanks for appreciating my Monopoly write--it obviously hit home with u--You REALLY are blessed to STILL have your father..a real unfortunate thing that his boss underappreciated him and treated him like garbage. Just love him and make each day count! Now, this poem of yours....I am drawn to the 5 key words in here--hope,dream, thought, lust, insane. Excellent combo of words that ALL make a confusing spider web in life when mixed together. Great poem. I love the analogies! High five, poet!
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May 31, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Brilliant imagery in this write, prima
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