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Powerless Creature

looking forward to the night
drawning my feelings in mozart
dreaming of a chance to dissolve into the music
separate  body from  mind'
let it free to lead  through thik walls
escaping the live
becoming a new light 
surrended by ordinary ,  seek unknown 
realizing  weaknessess for the desire of higher experiences
unable to go on without the trill of extasy
powerless creature
made by mistake 
without the clue of what is to become
looking for signs 
loosing the sight 
darkness 
covers the space 
hours stand still 
hopless
calendar turns pages 
waves move the sand
only space made of both...
dark , light , solid and still
unpatient , calm 
full of knowledge 
untouched by aging 
staring won't solve it
waiting ..
looking into...
drawning...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 2/20/2012 10:10:00 PM
I feel the beginnings of a strong experimental poet when I read this. Keep working on developing this atmosphere you're creating.  -KMD
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