Powerless

This rain is coming,
                                             In our life,
                                             As winds blow it forward,
                                             no more strife,
                                             So powerless to fight,
                                             in all it's fury,
                                             In all that we know,
                                             never a worry,
                                             For within is our love,
                                             in all it's fullness,
                                             Our rain of love,
                                             in all it's goodness.






                                     created by johnaarongreen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/30/2013 1:32:00 PM
Miss you John, just needed to tell you and my hope is that things are starting to even out and maybe even turn around. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 9/11/2012 8:12:00 PM
Rain to cleanse and wash away all the things that get in the way to cloud our vision. If only love were like that John; the hurtin parts still hang on too sometimes. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 7/16/2012 12:07:00 AM
I'm doing good... guess what???? I was wondering about you today.. Than decided not to wonder toooo much, because sooner or later you would pop up... and here you are dropping by to say hi.... it was very sweet of you. I guess i will call it an IRONIC call... cause out of every day, today I wondered about you before i logged on the soup.... I'm glad you love keeping in touch with your friends... always~ PD
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Date: 6/9/2012 9:39:00 AM
Sad but beautiful at the same time John. Deep inside us some of all love remains . Love to a very special friend in poetry. Anne
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Date: 6/8/2012 7:49:00 AM
A very good write. Very deep, John. Thanks for stopping by. :)
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Date: 6/6/2012 4:55:00 PM
Hello, John, miss your kindness around here.. I've been running busy, once again,((i hate being busy)) Hold on let me go and grab your umbrella. ..lol... Never mind. I love the powerless feeling the goodness of rain leaves behind. Remember a promise at every end. can invade my open space anytime. How are you? Are you getting your muse back? hope to hear from you again...pd
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Date: 5/31/2012 10:36:00 PM
It almost seems like a cleansing rain...washing the worries away! Perfect tho'ts! G.
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:03:00 PM
Love this poem of yours John!!!
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