Edward Ibeh Poet Dodoitsu

Powerless

seams of marriage come part 
as house of cards tumble down;
child's glue not holding parents 
all attempts in vain



Bite-Size Poem no.37 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
Date written: 02/25/2022

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Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2022 at 9:11 PM this describes so many unfortunate situations in the world. well done, edward. Also, thanks for my placement in your recently judged contest. Edward Ibeh March 3, 2022 at 5:06 AM You're welcome, Andrea:-) Thanks for dropping by, my friend.

Paulette Calasibetta February 25, 2022 at 11:10 AM Sad but true, the reality unveiled with your Bite-Size nugget, splendid Dodoitsu! Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette Edward Ibeh February 25, 2022 at 2:59 PM Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Paulette:-)

Heidi Sands February 25, 2022 at 9:29 AM Oh. So sad Edward. You have written this so well. I can feel it. I hope your day is going ok :) Edward Ibeh February 25, 2022 at 2:57 PM Thank you so much for the feedback and visit, Heidi:-)