Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

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Powerful Togetherness

Written: December 11, 2023
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While drudging impresses to cease,
        Within the ethereal forbearance of night
        And the cosmic vast space is stormless,
        From the hour of darkness until daylight,
        And anxiousness is ultimately formless
Imbrication is referred to as "Peace."

Imbroglio, languor, and hidden disarray
       This parade of nimble cued is wordless
       This will never genuinely be worthless,
       This is increasing beyond nerveless
       This spinning wheel is reverseless,
The periphery of the panacea display.

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Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 12, 2023 at 3:57 PM Sotto I'm going crazy reading this poem. I try to interpretate, which is not easy for me. You write about peace that we can build if we want. The problem is that Peace is as a God to be looking for in our days and it's something we should work out. Right?

Shadow Hamilton December 12, 2023 at 9:24 AM I like this write very much nice flow and pace to it Sotto hugs Shadow

Ink Empress December 12, 2023 at 5:12 AM Power of togetherness so well depicted here dr sotto, i got lost within your brilliant and Mellifluous rhymes so seamlessly flowing throughout this artistic poem: your way with phrasing things is very captivating: the need for peace and serenity in a world of chaos can be felt through your lines too:”And anxiousness is ultimately formless Imbrication is referred to as "Peace."” Thought provoking! Absolutely loved reading this one: exquisite as always: sending you light always

Karen Jones December 11, 2023 at 5:37 PM There is that brilliant vocabulary. I must confess you teach me new words! Love the word choice and the rhyme!

Hilda Greenhough December 11, 2023 at 4:31 PM Poem of beautiful connections that assures us of permanence. The accompanying picture is riveting. Thanks to you.