Powerful Togetherness

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Written: December 11, 2023 ____________________________________________ While drudging impresses to cease, Within the ethereal forbearance of night And the cosmic vast space is stormless, From the hour of darkness until daylight, And anxiousness is ultimately formless Imbrication is referred to as "Peace." Imbroglio, languor, and hidden disarray This parade of nimble cued is wordless This will never genuinely be worthless, This is increasing beyond nerveless This spinning wheel is reverseless, The periphery of the panacea display.

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Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/12/2023 3:57:00 PM

Sotto I'm going crazy reading this poem. I try to interpretate, which is not easy for me. You write about peace that we can build if we want. The problem is that Peace is as a God to be looking for in our days and it's something we should work out. Right?

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/12/2023 9:24:00 AM

I like this write very much nice flow and pace to it Sotto hugs Shadow

Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 5:12:00 AM

Power of togetherness so well depicted here dr sotto, i got lost within your brilliant and Mellifluous rhymes so seamlessly flowing throughout this artistic poem: your way with phrasing things is very captivating: the need for peace and serenity in a world of chaos can be felt through your lines too:”And anxiousness is ultimately formless Imbrication is referred to as "Peace."” Thought provoking! Absolutely loved reading this one: exquisite as always: sending you light always

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/12/2023 4:40:00 AM

dear Sotto--I took solace in your words of peace. I suppose in this time of year and with global matters as they are, I yearn for peace and sometimes wonder if it's disappeared. Yet, in my heart & soul I know there's a permanence to peace...it never disappears, just wanes. Thank you for your lovely words and uplifting message. You made my day, your poetess friend in Texas

Karen Jones

Date: 12/11/2023 5:37:00 PM

There is that brilliant vocabulary. I must confess you teach me new words! Love the word choice and the rhyme!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/11/2023 4:31:00 PM

Poem of beautiful connections that assures us of permanence. The accompanying picture is riveting. Thanks to you.