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Power of Words

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Written: May 10, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cosmic candor will be suitable beyond our sight, providing insight we sift and shift, sustaining a sanctum, carefulness must be displayed, as amorphous words uttered, cosmos works in tandem, with our intentions, In this wild environment, that may seem beyond repair In wild minds, we find no concern, each soul craves to be aware, we should strive for calm not despair, together, we can be substantive, and mend anathematized minds making us utterly magnificent. Words seem ambivalent yet, possess vast strength. as any skilled poet would attest and may usher us in archaic paths.  leading us to faraway moons leaving us arcane in a mesmerizing gaze, words can exude golden honey, but can also aureate souls, and beleaguer afflictions, & caterwaul time to a standstill, whether in art or blithe nature,  we stoutly witness moments,  that urge garrulous trivial manner. & leave dinkum impact on lives. In that face an eon of desultory, talk, a lifetime of anguish,  glazed over are those eyes with diaphanous teardrops that never fall but were swallowed as water. Parched lips are always sealed. Uncluttering a word to ease torment & disconsolate, or hope inebriated into smithereens and dreams ravaged by effusive tempests; ephemeral furrows on the brow, those trenches in which all previous battles were fought, and fatuous wounds endured, all frivolous fights are done, let's await an ending.
 

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Date: 5/12/2024 3:46:00 PM
SP, we must love words! Using them to end make progress is a really good thing most of us here support wholeheartedly! You're making my inner expression feel like smiling!
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Date: 5/11/2024 3:52:00 PM
Your poem beautifully explores the power of language to shape our perceptions of the cosmos and our inner selves. The imagery of cosmic candor and the sanctum of words suggests a deep reverence for the interconnectedness of language and the universe. Through skillful wordplay and evocative imagery, the poet invites readers to contemplate the transformative potential of language to both heal and harm, to uplift and beleaguer.
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Date: 5/11/2024 5:25:00 AM
Power of your diction on display, my friend. Your poem dwells in meaningful exploration of thoughts---words can exude golden honey, but can also aureate souls, and beleaguer afflictions--each soul craves to be aware, we should strive for calm not despair---Excellent, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/11/2024 5:11:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem from the beginning. These words captured my attention and my heart: Cosmic candor will be suitable beyond our sight, providing insight. You've captured the profound impact of words, regardless of one's intent. I especially liked these lines: Words seem ambivalent yet, possess vast strength. Those words are similar to the ones my mother shared with me. She wanted words to empower me, to allow for expression but subject them to abuse or misuse. Your poem spoke to me!!
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Date: 5/11/2024 2:16:00 AM
The power of words and unity and how it can calm and soothe so many that dwell and are consumed with darkness can be depicted through your profound poem here. I love the depth of what youg conveyed here in the most wise and philosophical manner dr sotto. I especially love the lines “ we should strive for calm not despair, together, we can be substantive, and mend anathematized mindsl great reminder to all of us readers and i love the flow and exquisite diction used througg and through!
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