Power

knowledge puzzles lifted cherishing rising thoughts propulsion to improvement wisdom Cinquain written August 5/21 For Brian Strand Contest, 4 or 5 line poem

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2021 11:48:00 AM

If we improve on the knowledge front gradually we gain some wisdom in some areas. I enjoyed reading this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/7/2021 5:43:00 PM

My appreciation, Sara. Your kind remarks spur many poetry soupers' pens. Take care. Cheers Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/6/2021 6:54:00 AM

So Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/6/2021 5:10:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj. My first cinquain + there is certainly room for improvement. However, I appreciate your thoughtful thumbs up. Cheers, Brian