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Powder Puff Dreams

Poof! Disintegrated Shattered expectations Should have known The clues were there High hopes All up in smoke Exploding in thin air Powder puff dreams AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on October 27, 2018

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/28/2018 4:38:00 PM

Says much more than what is written! With each line speaks louder. The haunting “the clues were there”

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 6:16:00 PM

Yes, Kim. Glad this poem resounded with you. Thanks for your visit and comment.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/27/2018 9:31:00 PM

This is sad, but perfectly brilliant! I can't imagine a better way to describe this feeling. Great work!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2018 10:35:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/27/2018 9:17:00 PM

Great imagery. Certainly resonates with me! Nice one, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2018 10:35:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/27/2018 4:01:00 PM

Powder puff dreams. What a great way to show how fast they can dissolve, disintegrate or float precariously away.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2018 7:05:00 PM

Thank, Caren, for your lovely visit and comment.