Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Powder Puff Dreams

Poof!
Disintegrated
Shattered expectations
Should have known
The clues were there
High hopes
All up in smoke
Exploding in thin air
Powder puff dreams



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

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Kim Rodrigues October 28, 2018 at 4:38 PM Says much more than what is written! With each line speaks louder. The haunting “the clues were there” Line Gauthier October 28, 2018 at 6:16 PM Yes, Kim. Glad this poem resounded with you. Thanks for your visit and comment.

Rhona Mcferran October 27, 2018 at 9:31 PM This is sad, but perfectly brilliant! I can't imagine a better way to describe this feeling. Great work! Line Gauthier October 27, 2018 at 10:35 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona.

Gershon Wolf October 27, 2018 at 9:17 PM Great imagery. Certainly resonates with me! Nice one, Line. Line Gauthier October 27, 2018 at 10:35 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.

Caren Krutsinger October 27, 2018 at 4:01 PM Powder puff dreams. What a great way to show how fast they can dissolve, disintegrate or float precariously away. Line Gauthier October 27, 2018 at 7:05 PM Thank, Caren, for your lovely visit and comment.