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Pout Pretzels



Standing alone in a festive crowd,
silent tears falling 
		         to 
			    the 
			         ground
				    amid 
			       the 
		            gaiety  
	      rising  cheerfully  loud

Twisted emotions is a troubling soothe
When out of the corner of your teary pout,
you notice her 
compassionately looking at you

Then she comes your wintry worn way,
and offers a warm and gentle snowflake hello 

Such butter sweet kindness
melts the pain in your pretzel heart

Still, she goes one step above
the Good Samaritan royal standard 
of delivering cherubic wingspan comfort

She taste the salt of your suffering
with her naked fingers
Ungloved ... her bare hand
feels the long cold 
settled in the hope shortened pulses within
She delicately senses that
you’re fragilely hanging on to the joy of living

And she intuitively knows  ...  with a frosted eyelid twinkling,
you’re in desperate need of a lonely holiday saving friend

Someone who will patiently hear the leaven fears,
and help tenderly 
with the cordial unbending 
of a sad, winding path —  
Sorrows fraught with tears over the frozen years

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/15/2018 8:48:00 PM
Great imagery and wonderful!
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:28:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, "help tenderly with the cordial unbending of a sad, winding path — " I love this line.
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:20:00 PM
spot on when one needs warmth on a holyday which highlights love in our universe... glorious write, freddie...huggs
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