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Pout Pretzels

Standing alone in a festive crowd, silent tears falling to the ground amid the gaiety rising cheerfully loud Twisted emotions is a troubling soothe When out of the corner of your teary pout, you notice her compassionately looking at you Then she comes your wintry worn way, and offers a warm and gentle snowflake hello Such butter sweet kindness melts the pain in your pretzel heart Still, she goes one step above the Good Samaritan royal standard of delivering cherubic wingspan comfort She taste the salt of your suffering with her naked fingers Ungloved ... her bare hand feels the long cold settled in the hope shortened pulses within She delicately senses that you’re fragilely hanging on to the joy of living And she intuitively knows ... with a frosted eyelid twinkling, you’re in desperate need of a lonely holiday saving friend Someone who will patiently hear the leaven fears, and help tenderly with the cordial unbending of a sad, winding path — Sorrows fraught with tears over the frozen years

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Date: 12/15/2018 8:48:00 PM
Great imagery and wonderful!
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:28:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, "help tenderly with the cordial unbending of a sad, winding path — " I love this line.
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:20:00 PM
spot on when one needs warmth on a holyday which highlights love in our universe... glorious write, freddie...huggs
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