Nette Onclaud Poet Senryu

Pours of Sunset

orange glint of night
dipping on my warm bosoms...
through pours of sunset

like sparkling champagne...
the beaded  whiff of mystique
dances on my flesh



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Subimal Sinha-Roy November 2, 2017 at 11:59 PM Congratulations, Nette on your fine win.

Kim Merryman November 26, 2015 at 7:28 PM A sensual, alluring write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich November 24, 2015 at 10:12 AM Congrats, Nette. Wish I could see more. I still have over 30 comments to return. haha. But who's counting!!

Skat A November 24, 2015 at 4:27 AM Nette, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT

Eve Roper November 23, 2015 at 9:12 PM Wow! Excellent! Congratulations on your win!

James Inman November 23, 2015 at 11:26 AM Sounds like a wonderful evening, Nette. Beautiful!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 23, 2015 at 9:50 AM Congratulations Nette. A beautiful description of sunset.

CayCay Godwin November 22, 2015 at 6:29 AM Just divine! CayCay

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2015 at 3:58 PM wow, that last one is so awesome, Nette. Were we allowed to do more than one? In any event, I am sure this will be a winner!

Jajosh Ongado November 19, 2015 at 12:02 PM Glad you found your essence through a sunset, and that you took me there with the gold of your earthy pen!

Franco Gonza November 19, 2015 at 11:48 AM You are as sensual as gushing sunset!

Poet Tacito November 19, 2015 at 10:54 AM Some things just don't change with you. Like the impact you still continue to leave w/each new stanza. I want a glass of Moscato now. :)

Alexis Y. November 19, 2015 at 7:45 AM Nette, you have penned a beautilful picture. Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7