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Pours of Sunset

orange glint of night dipping on my warm bosoms... through pours of sunset like sparkling champagne... the beaded whiff of mystique dances on my flesh End October Standard Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand /center>

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 11/2/2017 11:59:00 PM

Congratulations, Nette on your fine win.

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/26/2015 7:28:00 PM

A sensual, alluring write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 10:12:00 AM

Congrats, Nette. Wish I could see more. I still have over 30 comments to return. haha. But who's counting!!

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 4:27:00 AM

Nette, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 11/23/2015 9:12:00 PM

Wow! Excellent! Congratulations on your win!

James Inman

Date: 11/23/2015 11:26:00 AM

Sounds like a wonderful evening, Nette. Beautiful!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/23/2015 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations Nette. A beautiful description of sunset.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/22/2015 6:29:00 AM

Just divine! CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2015 3:58:00 PM

wow, that last one is so awesome, Nette. Were we allowed to do more than one? In any event, I am sure this will be a winner!

Jajosh Ongado

Date: 11/19/2015 12:02:00 PM

Glad you found your essence through a sunset, and that you took me there with the gold of your earthy pen!

Franco Gonza

Date: 11/19/2015 11:48:00 AM

You are as sensual as gushing sunset!

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/19/2015 10:54:00 AM

Some things just don't change with you. Like the impact you still continue to leave w/each new stanza. I want a glass of Moscato now. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/19/2015 7:45:00 AM

Nette, you have penned a beautilful picture. Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7