Bryan Norton Poet Rhyme

Pour Your Heart Out

Pour your heart out
Pour it and see
Something inside
That is longing to be

Something is ripe
Something you need
Something you planted
Is going to seed

Love is the garden
That grows in the heart
Plant it and share it
To make a fresh start

Sweat is the swagger
That waters the weeds
Love is the kindness
That everyone needs

Water your garden
With love everyday
Flowers are blooming
To show you the way

Love is the choice
To be one with the Earth
Pour your heart out
For a peaceful rebirth.

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Joanna Daniel October 3, 2023 at 10:47 PM Awesome writing, Bryan, congratulations:)

Ink Empress October 1, 2023 at 10:56 PM “Love is the garden that grows in the heart” that line! And so much more stood out for me. Seamless write, well deserved win, congratulations Bryan Norton October 2, 2023 at 1:02 AM Didn't realize I had something remaining to be judged. Thank you for reading me. Your friend, Bryan Love is the garden Joy is the fruit Kindness the seed In a spiritual root Harvest the joy Give it away Love is enough In a garden buffet.

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2023 at 9:19 PM Way to go, Bryan. Congrats on a great win Bryan Norton October 2, 2023 at 1:07 AM Thanks Andrea. Thank you for being my poetry sunshine. Take care, Bryan

Matt Caliri October 1, 2023 at 4:55 PM "Sweat is the swagger," won me over. Congrats on 2nd place out of 75 entries! You had a classic approach to this and nailed it. Loved your piece. Bryan Norton October 2, 2023 at 1:10 AM Thank you Matt. I'm very gratified to know you like this poem, Take care. Look forward to your next contest. Bryan

Brian Sambourne September 10, 2023 at 10:44 AM Your ability to rhyme and provide a connective flow in your verse is truly commendable. Congratulations! Brian

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2023 at 12:47 PM This is lovely, my friend. My two cats you asked me about are not as affectionate as I'd hoped for. They just kind of live with me, doing their own thing. We got a nice Australian shephere named Lucy Lu, and Joe and I are both such a mess - me from my weird conditions and joe from an industrial accident that left him really messsed up. You'll have to email me again so we can talk Bryan Norton September 10, 2023 at 3:41 PM Hi Andrea. I certainly will. Thanks for reading. Luv, Bryan

Deb M September 3, 2023 at 7:12 AM Lovely and well written poem Bryan! Debx

Harveen Kaur September 3, 2023 at 4:59 AM Nice one!