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Pour Down Rain Day

Leaves soggy drowned on path abandoned by walkers, joggers, bikers, boarders, lovers, mothers with baby carriages, lost soul wanderers, others. Abandoned earth musty buried in compost's organic decay splashes of mildewy moldiness earthworms over-watered wilting on bed of black lettuce croutons for birds that wearily snuzzle in treetops with shiver blankies toe to beak. Squirrels inspect nuts for cracks against weather neighborhood shock follows new season inundation belly growling loudly and shouting dark, damp, cold hints of end

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Sidney Beck

Date: 10/23/2011 11:45:00 AM

another marvellous dose f images....exc Nance...me likes

Sidney Beck

Date: 10/23/2011 11:45:00 AM

whoops...f = of

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/22/2011 7:06:00 PM

Fine picture of autumn! Reminds me of the first page of Ray Bradbury's "The October Country". Peace & Power. Thank you for your comments. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2011 12:20:00 AM

NAncy, this is one of your best for me here. I just love the imagery in here. Especially those worms as croutons for birds! Great rainy day writing! and oh my gosh, don't even get ME thinking of a Corvette. The older ones with the LONG wide front end. oh my.

Cory Long

Date: 10/21/2011 7:30:00 PM

this was so descriptive I loved it!! cory

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 7:12:00 PM

You are amazing Nancy... I love your way of poetry.. I enjoyed the image of the birdies all shivered up from toe to beak... thank you for sharing,,always,..p.d.