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Pounding of the Hammer

“I am the monster that breathing men would kill. I am Dracula.” Bram Stoker The successive pounding of the hammer. The stake in his heart took my breath away. Came the bright torches, village clamor, the successive pounding of the hammer. Rosin of the vampire, screeching glamour, tightening of cold hands, recant to pray. The successive pounding of the hammer. The stake in his heart took my breath away. 10/28/2020

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Date: 10/29/2020 11:02:00 AM
Very day and full of spooking imagery...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 10/29/2020 7:43:00 AM
Excellent, vividly descriptive triolet, Kim! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 10:00:00 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 10/29/2020 7:10:00 AM
- A little difference between yours and mine, in the way it is written ... but, I'm far from an expert on this form ... I love yours, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 7:41:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 10/29/2020 6:59:00 AM
Terrific Kim! I really enjoyed this dark one. :) Kin
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 7:41:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 10/29/2020 4:44:00 AM
wow. I haven't seen this in a while... love the write. God bless you my friend
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Regina!
Date: 10/29/2020 4:05:00 AM
I am enjoying this fabulous Dracula induced triolet on Halloween week!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 10/29/2020 2:10:00 AM
Images of Christopher Lee are in my head, a spooky scene Kim. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 10/28/2020 11:58:00 PM
The first time I saw Dracula I was scared stiff till I realized they don't exist. A lovely triolet. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:28:00 AM
lol...Thank you, Victor!
Date: 10/28/2020 8:33:00 PM
The drama of the scene is well portrayed in your awesome imagery, Kim. It's a Fave!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2020 9:01:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 10/28/2020 7:04:00 PM
My ears resound with hammer's pound. Such a vivid and musical piece, Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2020 7:33:00 PM
Thanks, Newton!

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