Pots Overflowing

My pot filled with broth
Made from years of tears
Boiled over and spilled
Putting out my desire
To cry any more tears
For the carrots I need
To feel feed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 10:43 AM
May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry and thank you for sharing it Randall. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 12:52 PM
Very interesting write with deep meanings, Randall
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October 25, 2010 at 12:51 PM
a sense this going both ways, deep write, enjoyed,..P.D.
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