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Potential Suitors Fooled

Patrimonia’s beauty fooled men, who focused on her companions Two wolves with enormous heads, who seemed ominously frightful. Potential suiters did what they could to try to get past them Not realizing the wolves were not the most dangerous of the three Hair of auburn, amber eyes with golden glints, Patrimonia was magic. Her skin was as delicate as her heart was unforgiving and diabolical. Like a giant recluse spider, she ate men up one feeling at a time, Tossing them over the castle gates after they were gasping for air. Her girlish figure, and her satin gowns practically screamed princess. Fearful of her guardians, not realizing both wolves were terrified of her. Each male had to learn for himself, for they each wanted to believe That beauty and goodness walk together

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Date: 7/27/2021 9:57:00 AM
This is a phenomenally well-written piece, Caren. You should get it published for money! Loved it.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/27/2021 9:19:00 PM
Thank you Hank. I enjoyed writing it. Some diabolical people are served to us in amazingly beautiful packages.

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