Wilma Neels Poet Senryu

'potential In-Laws'

I heard about them
hope they are prepared for me
I am not the ex

his mom’s favorite 
I’ll show her respect, that’s me
besides he loves me

that is important
they live in another town
my future in-laws 


By: Wilma N. Neels

050620111145


Contest : In Laws
7th place

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John Freeman June 8, 2011 at 8:16 PM Wilma, good to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2011 at 10:18 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Jack Horne June 7, 2011 at 12:08 PM Many congrats, Wilma : )

Dinda Minardi June 7, 2011 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2011 at 9:00 PM good one about "potentials" Congrats on your win, sweetie.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 6, 2011 at 3:52 PM wow Wilma another great win to enjoy with many congrats on an excellent entry for Dr. Ram in laws contest.. amazing words .. enjoy luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 3:20 PM Congratultions on the seventh place win in my contest, Wilma

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2011 at 9:12 PM typo, I meant HIS mom

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2011 at 9:11 PM WAy to do it, write about the future in laws!! Add into this: not to marry the guy who can't get along with him mom!

Carolyn Devonshire June 5, 2011 at 12:39 PM Wilma, it must be tough to marry a man whose ex is his mother's favorite. Thank goodness they live in another town. And I'm sure you would be kind to the ex; it's in your nature. Dr. Ram will appreciate your terrific entry. Best wishes in his contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud June 5, 2011 at 6:44 AM awhhh, so sweet of you wilms...and sweeter is he, so future in-laws aren;t problems, then.. charmed am i! winning streaks and huggs! :) nette

Poet Tacito June 5, 2011 at 6:37 AM 1st Haiku sets it off. I love it.

Michael J. Falotico June 5, 2011 at 6:11 AM AHH the inlaws always asked to stay close but not to close... WHo wouldn't love you as a daughter inlaw...love Michael