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For 1463 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Potato Bug

He was a dog without a bone,
a nightingale in monotone, 
a cat that was canary-less -
a man who lived with less. 

One day, he took to the road,
the holes in his coat, they showed,
but he carried in his pocket,
a little silver locket,

with a picture of his mother.  
One way or another, 
he'd find a way to make her proud,
and he'd lose that ol' black cloud.

But the only thing he found
was a wee thing in the ground,
which gave his heart a tug. 
He eyed it with a shrug.

'Twas only a potato bug.
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Harp Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 11:35 PM
Ahh, but perhaps an interesting potato bug! And this is an interesting poem. Like your phrase "a nightingale in monotone." Good images, David.
Crandall Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Thanks, Moon Harp! I realize potato bugs are not for everyone, but when I was a kid, I would sometimes encounter them under the dirt when I was pulling weeds in the garden. They are unique! I almost said "very" unique, but I understand that's not proper English. They have a huge head, and are so ugly, in some paradoxical way, I considered them to be a kind of prize.
Springs Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 3:02 AM
Kind of sad...but wonderful.
Crandall Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 2:26 PM
Thanks, Ava! I used to like potato bugs when I was a kid - they're ugly, but, well not quite wonderful, but pretty cool.
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 4:13 PM
Haha. Your poems often amuse me and that's a very good thing
Crandall Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 2:24 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 11:47 AM
Hello David Crandall, Well nothing can be done with a potato bug. My friend, enjoy your day. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 3:30 PM
Hello David, Yep! that is what i thought. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Crandall Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Hi Darlene, yup, true! have a great day!
Delegans Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 11:16 AM
Well written and entertaining, David. Enjoy your weekend!
Crandall Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Thanks, Christopher!
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