Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Potato

mass of flesh
                                         covered by grey skin
                                             with small eyes 

                                             kitchen queen
                                              of vegetables
                                          house wife's choice

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David Meade May 15, 2015 at 11:50 PM and they are very good to eat!! baked, fried, mashed . . . I eat them with everything. Nicely done my dear friend. 7 Bl Devnath May 16, 2015 at 9:53 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation and 7. Loved always,bl

Nette Onclaud May 15, 2015 at 2:29 PM these are creatively done, bl.. i like both; impressed!.. huggs Bl Devnath May 16, 2015 at 9:54 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your visit and for beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Sara Kendrick May 15, 2015 at 2:13 PM Good one..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Bl Devnath May 16, 2015 at 9:55 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your visit and for beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Catherine Labeau May 15, 2015 at 2:03 PM not a veggie but a root I like it Bl Devnath May 16, 2015 at 9:57 AM Okay, my lovely friend. That's also very tastey if cooked with flavoured ghee and sugar. Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison May 15, 2015 at 1:27 PM very clever haiku - of all the vegetables potatoes are my least favourite:-) Hugs jan xx Bl Devnath May 15, 2015 at 1:33 PM Thanks my lovely friend for you like it and mine too, coz my wife can't cook with out it. Loved always, bl