Fritz Purdum Poet Rhyme

Posting a Poem

Thoughts formed into words
written to be heard
Accepted or liked
maybe it might
Fall flat
get laughed at
Be dumb
ridicule by some
Or by chance
at a second glance
It could be good
understood
Do I dare
share?
Something of me
others could read
Poetry.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Barbara Gorelick July 3, 2014 at 1:40 AM I feel like this every time I post. Is it stupid, mundane, childlike...? on and on. You just have to forge on and hope for the best. Good one ! BG Fritz Purdum July 3, 2014 at 5:46 AM Yes I agree. It is funny the ones people seem to like and the ones that seem to be ignored.

Casarah Nance July 2, 2014 at 6:48 PM Yes Yes share! :) Fritz Purdum July 2, 2014 at 8:22 PM You are very kind. Thank you