Poster Paradise No More

ocean meets brown sand
year-long heat like this skin
burns lying post-cards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Hello Jasmine, I find this poem very interesting. Have a nice day my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:44 AM
An interesting one.
Koria Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Thanks Richard!
Justice Ndubuisi Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 3:31 AM
Nice! "ocean meets brown sand" Very catchy... Keep writing
Koria Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Thank you!!
Man Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 7:05 AM
Hi Jasmine.. So glad I had the opportunity to read your interesting poem this morning. I'm heading home from a road gig today and won't have this chance again for a while. Happy Weekend!
Koria Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thank you for reading!
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