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Poster Paradise No More

ocean meets brown sand year-long heat like this skin burns lying post-cards

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/14/2018 12:32:00 PM

Hello Jasmine, I find this poem very interesting. Have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2018 8:44:00 AM

An interesting one.

Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/12/2018 12:43:00 PM

Thanks Richard!

Chime Justice Ndubuisi

Date: 7/1/2018 3:31:00 AM

Nice! "ocean meets brown sand" Very catchy... Keep writing

Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/1/2018 5:19:00 PM

Thank you!!

Lyric Man

Date: 6/30/2018 7:05:00 AM

Hi Jasmine.. So glad I had the opportunity to read your interesting poem this morning. I'm heading home from a road gig today and won't have this chance again for a while. Happy Weekend!

Jasmine Koria
Date: 6/30/2018 7:39:00 AM

Thank you for reading!