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Positivity

Negativity is something We all have once in awhile. Some of us more often than others And others are always faking a smile. They feel like everyday is meaningless, Like pain is the only thing that can exist. And when they do feel happiness even for a moment, It just disappears in the mist. Sometimes they just hate themselves like I do, And think that everything they do is a mistake. But I’ve realized overtime That this is not the case. Because even if you don’t believe it, You have to be aware, And even when we do terrible things, There is always someone that cares. We all slip up sometimes, We all make mistakes, We all have days where everything that happens Is a huge waste. Feeling negativity your whole life Is wasting just wasting it more. So get off your bed feeling sorry for yourself And explore. For life has it’s wonders, And it has it’s pains, It has terrible people, And it has it’s sparks that turn into flames. And many famous people have said this over and over again, And it is true. It’s not about what has happened to you, it’s how you react, And that is up to you. So...be positive always. Negative never. Live your life to the fullest, And you’ll love it forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/8/2018 8:31:00 PM
You told me not to read your first poem which just meant I had too. Anyway this poem is pretty awesome. I love it!
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Date: 5/10/2018 4:15:00 PM
Thanks! It's probably one of my better one to be honest, which is sad, but I've seen better first poems.
Date: 4/4/2018 1:29:00 AM
The glass is half full tonight and I hope to stay this way hehe, your poem is a beautiful creation to that end my friend!
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Date: 4/5/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thanks, Kyle! Also, I saw you got the POTD! Good job!
Date: 12/18/2017 5:59:00 PM
OMG OMG OMG TWO FAMOUS POETS COMMENT THIS IS THE BEST DAY OF MY LIFE THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS HAVE A GOOD DAY THANK YOU FOR NOTICING ME YOU TWO ARE THE BEST ILL TRY REALLY HARD TO BE AS GOOD AS YOU TWO ONE DAY :D
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Date: 11/10/2017 4:40:00 AM
- Hello Connor :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem - Greetings and best wishes - S.S. :)
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Date: 11/10/2017 7:35:00 AM
Thanks :D
Date: 11/9/2017 4:21:00 PM
Great first post... Welcome to poetry soup Connor..
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Date: 11/9/2017 6:09:00 PM
I accidentally put this in as acrostic, as did I with my other poem. Sorry XD
Date: 11/9/2017 11:41:00 AM
I know it's not great. It's my first poem. Deal with it.
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Date: 11/9/2017 1:48:00 PM
I made this in English class in, like, 8 minutes.

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