Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Positive vibes

A long chain of each white wispy cloud,
seemed so far but also so near
Traveling the sky as if proud
Soft enough, it could wipe a tear

Drifting freely, with peace abound
A simple sight with magnitude
The signs of spring are all around
Positive vibes reach altitude

Heidi Sands

4/29/24

ABAB...8 syllables

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R J. Elless April 30, 2024 at 2:56 PM Heidi, that is catchy and positive vibes especially are all good. I like it. Stay creative. Heidi Sands April 30, 2024 at 3:34 PM Thank you BJ. I appreciate your comment. I am happy you like it :)

Vijay Pandit April 29, 2024 at 5:46 PM Wonderful descriptions, Heidi--splendid imagery you brought to fore through your uplifting words, my friend. Positive vibes, indeed! Heidi Sands April 29, 2024 at 6:08 PM Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Hilda Greenhough April 29, 2024 at 5:10 PM Lovely poem that accents the height of clouds. It is exhilarating. Maybe a little dizzying, if you're afraid of heights. It's really wonderful. Heidi Sands April 29, 2024 at 6:08 PM Dizzying lol Thank you Hilda. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Darlene De Beaulieu April 29, 2024 at 3:56 PM Hello Heidi, I enjoyed this poem. As i read this poem i could vision the clouds you have seen. i am a cloud watcher. Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu April 30, 2024 at 10:08 AM Hello Heidi Yes I enjoyed this poem. Blessings m y friend /Darlene/ Heidi Sands April 29, 2024 at 4:22 PM I am happy you enjoyed this Darlene. My thoughts are with you.. blessings :)