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Positive Space

Snow covered field blankets the land One single tree stands proud in the space Silence engulfs this beautiful place making difficult things, easy to understand The twists and turns in life straighten out The anxiety drifts away in the air It is easy to feel all that is fair when positive things come about! 3/6/25 Heidi Sands (C)opyright

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Barthwell Farmer

Date: 3/17/2025 12:58:00 PM

Relating nature's graceful airs to a relaxing perspective that's appreciated through observation enhances the poignant and heartfelt imagery. I enjoyed reading.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2025 5:11:00 PM

I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for your comment :)

Mike Bayles

Date: 3/9/2025 9:45:00 AM

A nice depiction of a peaceful moment.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/9/2025 12:23:00 PM

Thank you Mike :)

Deb M

Date: 3/7/2025 9:00:00 AM

You deserve all the positive things that come your way Heidi...you have dealt with a lot and you come out of it with positivity....you are a very admiral woman Heidi! Your poem is just so beautiful! Debx

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/9/2025 12:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Deb. I appreciate your kindness :)

Deb M

Date: 3/7/2025 8:58:00 AM

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2025 10:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Deb. I try to stay positive through all the issues. You are kind. Have a nice day :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/7/2025 7:40:00 AM

Dear Heidi, How serene and uplifting! That single tree in a snow-covered field is breathtaking. You have beautifully illustrated how clarity and peace can emerge from simplicity, making life's complexities easier to navigate. Truly inspiring! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2025 10:52:00 AM

Thank you Daniel. It was serene. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/6/2025 9:20:00 PM

I sure like how one single tree -- one positive -- overcame all else. That's all it takes, really, eh? Once pointed in the right direction, life can be grand. Best wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2025 3:10:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. You are right . So much happens in life up and down, but in the right direction, we are ok. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/6/2025 2:49:00 PM

Hello Heidi i do agree with you. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2025 9:28:00 AM

hello Heidi, your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/6/2025 4:34:00 PM

Thank you Darlene. Hugs :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/6/2025 2:04:00 PM

I am uplifted by your poem Heidi. So often I have had my thoughts turn toward you, as you have been challenged with the disasters that befell your area of the US, and the health challenges. I too have been facing them and remember you, and your bravery, and it helps me to remember to pray for you at the same time feel a resolve to look for the goodness, hope in recovery of health. This blessed my heart SO much, very uplifting <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/6/2025 4:34:00 PM

That is so nice of you to say ! Thank you very much. Actually, I just now found a home to live. It took all this time to get settled since I had to sell my house. Long story , but closing is this month. I will be settled and at peace again. I am sorry to hear you have been facing issues too and please keep hope and faith. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/6/2025 1:08:00 PM

Submitted 3/6/25