Positive Space


Snow covered field blankets the land
One single tree stands proud in the space
Silence engulfs this beautiful place
making difficult things, easy to understand

The twists and turns in life straighten out
The anxiety drifts away in the air
It is easy to feel all that is fair
when positive things come about!

3/6/25

Heidi Sands

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Farmer Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 12:58 PM
Relating nature's graceful airs to a relaxing perspective that's appreciated through observation enhances the poignant and heartfelt imagery. I enjoyed reading.
Sands Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 5:11 PM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for your comment :)
Bayles Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 9:45 AM
A nice depiction of a peaceful moment.
Sands Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Mike :)
M  Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 9:00 AM
You deserve all the positive things that come your way Heidi...you have dealt with a lot and you come out of it with positivity....you are a very admiral woman Heidi! Your poem is just so beautiful! Debx
Sands Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Thank you so much Deb. I appreciate your kindness :)
M  Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 8:58 AM
You deserve all the positive things that come your way Heidi...you have dealt with a lot and you come out of it with positivity....you are a very admiral woman Heidi! Your poem is just so beautiful! Debx
Sands Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so much Deb. I try to stay positive through all the issues. You are kind. Have a nice day :)
Rodgers Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 7:40 AM
Dear Heidi, How serene and uplifting! That single tree in a snow-covered field is breathtaking. You have beautifully illustrated how clarity and peace can emerge from simplicity, making life's complexities easier to navigate. Truly inspiring! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Sands Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Daniel. It was serene. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Wolf Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 9:20 PM
I sure like how one single tree -- one positive -- overcame all else. That's all it takes, really, eh? Once pointed in the right direction, life can be grand. Best wishes, Gershon
Sands Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 3:10 AM
Thank you Gershon. You are right . So much happens in life up and down, but in the right direction, we are ok. :)
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March 6, 2025 at 2:49 PM
Hello Heidi i do agree with you. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 9:28 AM
hello Heidi, your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Sands Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Thank you Darlene. Hugs :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 2:04 PM
I am uplifted by your poem Heidi. So often I have had my thoughts turn toward you, as you have been challenged with the disasters that befell your area of the US, and the health challenges. I too have been facing them and remember you, and your bravery, and it helps me to remember to pray for you at the same time feel a resolve to look for the goodness, hope in recovery of health. This blessed my heart SO much, very uplifting <3
Sands Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 4:34 PM
That is so nice of you to say ! Thank you very much. Actually, I just now found a home to live. It took all this time to get settled since I had to sell my house. Long story , but closing is this month. I will be settled and at peace again. I am sorry to hear you have been facing issues too and please keep hope and faith. :)
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March 6, 2025 at 1:08 PM
Submitted 3/6/25
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