Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Positive Messages

If I could reach the clear blue skies,
I'd feel the freedom where the bird flies
In open space, I'd find my way,
spreading the words I have to say

Like a bird song, I would be heard
A positive tune with each word
A light above darkness below,
the rivers of problems that  flow

The heartbreaking stories all around,
need resolution with each sound
Healing hearts with music to hear,
eliminating all the fear

This creation, our home, our gift,
is a place for love to uplift
Deafening cries for help exist
We can't ignore or shake a fist

Let us be like the bird and fly
Carry the tune, across the sky
With every step across the ground,
there is always hope to be found

Heidi Sands

10/6/24

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Marilene Evans October 6, 2024 at 5:14 PM Positively encouraging. Burdens are heavy to carry and gets lighter when there is hope. Heidi Sands October 6, 2024 at 6:31 PM Thank you. Have a nice evening :)

Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2024 at 1:26 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful/lovely write/messages. What a great/true ending. Hugs... Have a blessed week writing away................... Heidi Sands October 6, 2024 at 4:22 PM I am happy that you enjoyed this. Thank you for the kind comment Paula :)

Joe Maverick October 6, 2024 at 12:03 PM If we do not persevere, we have become a part Of the problems..Thats how it looks from here.' Heidi.' Its said two wrongs don't make a right.' Yet it seems there are countries trying to make Fifty..' I can't agree with that! Heidi Sands October 6, 2024 at 4:21 PM You are right and we must. Good points. Thank you :)

Silent One October 6, 2024 at 10:33 AM Beautiful message my friend.. we all need positivity in our lives.. Heidi Sands October 6, 2024 at 4:21 PM Thank you very much Silent One. Yes, we do :)

Tom Cunningham October 6, 2024 at 9:01 AM Dispite all the gloom in the world it's still a beautiful world, we can only hope that things will get better. Hope you're keeping well Heidi. Tom Heidi Sands October 6, 2024 at 10:02 AM Ho Tom You are right, it is a beautiful world and we must believe it can get better I am doing much better. It has been very busy with all the changes, but I am more settled . Thank you. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Michael Tor October 6, 2024 at 8:59 AM Amen Heidi wishing these words of inspiration from you to spread. Beautifully written to uplift us all. Thank you for writing and sharing. God bless you... Heidi Sands October 6, 2024 at 10:00 AM Thank you Michael and you are welcome. I know how hard it is for people to live on this world today with so much wrong going on. Blessings :)