Positive: Darkness

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Poetic Form: Carpe Diem
Inspired: 2024 April 05
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Darkness may naught have any bright ideas, but it is smart enough to relieve our tensions of the day by helping us to sleep, ergo, there's no need to sleep tight, still, do have a good night.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/5/2024 4:39:00 PM

you have a good night's rest as well. I used to have such trouble sleeping. Now I don't need darkness or even quiet. I'm burning my candle at both ends and am tired....sleep, ah wonderful sleep at last!

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/5/2024 9:14:00 PM

Sleep I need, ohh yes, Sara, happy for you, -- I'll sleep on that matter, Aloha, William.