Poseidon's Paradise

Poseidon's Paradise

Sunbeams glide across oceans of gold,
awakening Poseidon from his slumber.
His trident flashes bolts of lightning,
summoning mermaids from their dreams.

Tails splashing rhythmically in delight,
their scales flash like colors of rainbows.
Seaweeds sway in depths of splendor...
blessed with water, their world is paradise.


Date:      07-08-2021
Contest:  Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Poetry Contest 
Sponsor:  Jack Webster
Placement: 2nd Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/9/2021 11:09:00 PM
This sounds like paradise! Beautiful description without adjectives!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/25/2022 4:06:00 PM
Many thanks, Jennifer. I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you for stopping by. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 9/11/2021 5:00:00 PM
I love the ocean and this is very uplifting, wish I was in the waves now. Enjoyed.
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Date: 3/25/2022 4:05:00 PM
Me too - Awww the ocean with all its ancient mysteries and beauty! Thank you M.L. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/20/2021 10:53:00 AM
Lovely and creative write Pandita, I hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/7/2021 7:05:00 PM
Awwww, dear Tom, thank you so much for your kind compliments. Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Date: 7/12/2021 2:16:00 AM
Beautiful creation. Congratulations!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/7/2021 7:04:00 PM
Thank you - thank you Christuraj. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/12/2021 12:52:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 8/7/2021 7:04:00 PM
I really appreciate it Beata, Thanks much. Hugs and more blessings. Pandita
Date: 7/9/2021 2:29:00 AM
Marvelously wonderful grand verse... Good luck in the contest! This is a " fav" for me! James
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Date: 8/7/2021 7:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, James for passing by and leaving your kind words! Hugs. Pandita.
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