Pandita Sietesantos Poet Free verse

Poseidon's Paradise

Poseidon's Paradise

Sunbeams glide across oceans of gold,
awakening Poseidon from his slumber.
His trident flashes bolts of lightning,
summoning mermaids from their dreams.

Tails splashing rhythmically in delight,
their scales flash like colors of rainbows.
Seaweeds sway in depths of splendor...
blessed with water, their world is paradise.


Date:      07-08-2021
Contest:  Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Poetry Contest 
Sponsor:  Jack Webster
Placement: 2nd Place

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Jennifer Fenn October 9, 2021 at 11:09 PM This sounds like paradise! Beautiful description without adjectives! Pandita Sietesantos March 25, 2022 at 4:06 PM Many thanks, Jennifer. I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you for stopping by. Hugs. Pandita

M. L. Kiser September 11, 2021 at 5:00 PM I love the ocean and this is very uplifting, wish I was in the waves now. Enjoyed. Pandita Sietesantos March 25, 2022 at 4:05 PM Me too - Awww the ocean with all its ancient mysteries and beauty! Thank you M.L. Hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham July 20, 2021 at 10:53 AM Lovely and creative write Pandita, I hope you are keeping well. Tom Pandita Sietesantos August 7, 2021 at 7:05 PM Awwww, dear Tom, thank you so much for your kind compliments. Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Christuraj Alex July 12, 2021 at 2:16 AM Beautiful creation. Congratulations! Pandita Sietesantos August 7, 2021 at 7:04 PM Thank you - thank you Christuraj. Hugs. Pandita

Beata Agustin July 12, 2021 at 12:52 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Pandita Sietesantos August 7, 2021 at 7:04 PM I really appreciate it Beata, Thanks much. Hugs and more blessings. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr. July 9, 2021 at 2:29 AM Marvelously wonderful grand verse... Good luck in the contest! This is a " fav" for me! James Pandita Sietesantos August 7, 2021 at 7:02 PM Thanks so much, James for passing by and leaving your kind words! Hugs. Pandita.