Poseidon's Child

I long to breathe the ocean air
and feel the sea breeze in my hair,
I long to sit and watch the tides,
the ocean waves that mesmerize.

To see the ocean's colors change
as storms roll in, dark clouds and rain.
The gulls embrace the rising winds
and so, the bird ballet begins.

Angry waves now rear their heads,
the ocean swells like molten lead.
At dawn, the sea is topaz-souled,
with rills of silver, crests of gold.

The twelfth house rules my sun and moon,
my eyes the hue of lost lagoons,
Poseidon's child, I need to be
where I belong, beside the sea.


©Danielle White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Steadman Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 9:06 AM
again this is truly a very brilliant write...true talent...Luke
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 10:21 AM
Perfect rhythm and rhyme. Vince
Heck Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Dear Danielle - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Laura's contest! Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 7:20 PM
Danielle this poem is very beautifully written with excellent Rhyme and flow - Congratulations on your third place win in Laura's contest - God Bless, MJ
La France Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 6:28 PM
A beautiful write, congrats on your win.. spirit and soul, constance
Saha Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 3:27 AM
A wonderful poem. Congrats on your win.
P. Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 10:37 PM
COngrats... wondeful write.. ~ Arany
Weber Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 12:47 PM
I enjoy the identification with the ocean on this poem, Danielle; you and the waves must feed each other on a regular basis! Wonderful expressions and word selections here: congrats on your worthy win on Laura McKenzie's "Love for the Ocean" contest! Warm regards, John.
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 11:40 AM
Such a lovely entry, Danielle! Congratulations on your winning poem! ~ love, Carrie
Winter Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 11:21 AM
So beautiful Danielle! Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest! Love, Shar
Degenhardt Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 9:53 AM
Absolutely lovely! The flow and rhyme are perfect as they put me there by the sea as well. Excellent writing. Michael
Black Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 8:29 AM
Makes me miss living on the coast... :(
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