Pos N Neg

Destroyer ~ Poet Contest Name any poem you posted this week pos n neg sort out the egg, the art of contemplating, the other part, the one of neg, it's been there since creation:) define the neg, reduce its size, till for pos-itive it, begs, arrives, self initiation, comes alive, and stands upon new legs. thanks bl d-s. NEUTRAL Don Johnson bl devnath re pos n neg... your verse was instrumental, the puppeter did well, the fool was forced to produce, the words of the short spell.... thanks babe...Don

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Kim Merryman

Date: 2/7/2012 7:36:00 PM

It's always fun to read your work, Don. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jon Arno

Date: 2/7/2012 5:16:00 PM

Congratulations on a great write . Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2012 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations to you on your placement in P.D's "Any Poem You Posted This Week" contest Don. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2012 8:54:00 PM

Don, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2012 1:58:00 PM

congrats DON on a tremendous third place win for poetic artistry from your pen luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2012 1:07:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams

Date: 2/6/2012 11:41:00 AM

Don mate a cracking win, congrats..Dave

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/6/2012 11:15:00 AM

Not sure what you said Don, but all your poems are magical. Congratulations

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/6/2012 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Don, love Elizabeth

Mike Dailey

Date: 2/6/2012 10:15:00 AM

I don't often understand your poem but I always stop to read them. congratulations on your win in this contest. Mike

Don Johnson
Date: 2/6/2012 3:44:00 PM

I just write the words that come to me ... think its about the positive and negative setbacks of life?

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/6/2012 9:00:00 AM

I don't really get this, though i've been trying. I think it's too scientific for my pea brain. But still, congratulations on your win!

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/6/2012 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations!

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/6/2012 6:08:00 AM

very nice write and a well deserved win...congrats on your win...........S.Ronthorpe

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/6/2012 3:48:00 AM

Congratulations Don, will need to read it a couple more times to understand but am trying xx

Don Johnson
Date: 2/6/2012 4:04:00 PM

i think its about the positive and negative influences of life? the last bit is a thank you to bi devnath... sorry to be confusing:(

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2012 5:17:00 PM

Interesting one, Don. I love your message to BL too!! a sweetie!

Don Johnson
Date: 1/26/2012 5:26:00 PM

the fool is forced into the game, to potter with words of fame, or platitudes so lame, but the cake is in the rising?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2012 4:51:00 PM

Interesting work..If for a contest, I need to check that one out..Good luck..reads like a winner..Thanks for the encouraging comment about my work..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/26/2012 9:36:00 AM

That it positively a great write Don! There's no negativity about it at all, thus you say it's neutral...I don't think so! I love the poem, Great Work!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/26/2012 6:54:00 AM

Congrats on your win all the ways. Thanks of my heart goes to you for this wonderful creation. Your love is precious for me, loved, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/26/2012 5:31:00 AM

i like the hip attitude about birth here, don... is this for a contest?.. unusual style!.. congrats on your win in my serenity contest and thanks for your support in many ways... :) huggs!