Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Pos N Neg

	Destroyer ~ Poet
Contest Name	any poem you posted this week

pos n neg sort out the egg,
the art of contemplating,
the other part, the one of neg,
it's been there since creation:)

define the neg,
reduce its size,
till for pos-itive it,
begs,
arrives,
self initiation,
comes alive,
and stands upon new legs. 


thanks bl d-s. NEUTRAL

Don Johnson

bl devnath

re pos n neg...
your verse was instrumental,
the puppeter did well,
the fool was forced to produce,
the words of the short spell....
thanks babe...Don

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Kim Merryman February 7, 2012 at 7:36 PM It's always fun to read your work, Don. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jon Arno February 7, 2012 at 5:16 PM Congratulations on a great write . Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown February 7, 2012 at 11:32 AM Congratulations to you on your placement in P.D's "Any Poem You Posted This Week" contest Don. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2012 at 8:54 PM Don, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 6, 2012 at 1:58 PM congrats DON on a tremendous third place win for poetic artistry from your pen luv..

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2012 at 1:07 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams February 6, 2012 at 11:41 AM Don mate a cracking win, congrats..Dave

Bob Quigley February 6, 2012 at 11:15 AM Not sure what you said Don, but all your poems are magical. Congratulations

Lizanne Scholtz February 6, 2012 at 10:20 AM Congratulations on your win Don, love Elizabeth

Mike Dailey February 6, 2012 at 10:15 AM I don't often understand your poem but I always stop to read them. congratulations on your win in this contest. Mike Don Johnson February 6, 2012 at 3:44 PM I just write the words that come to me ... think its about the positive and negative setbacks of life?

Black Eyed Susan February 6, 2012 at 9:00 AM I don't really get this, though i've been trying. I think it's too scientific for my pea brain. But still, congratulations on your win!

Christopher Bunton February 6, 2012 at 8:22 AM Congratulations!

Samual Ronthorpe February 6, 2012 at 6:08 AM very nice write and a well deserved win...congrats on your win...........S.Ronthorpe

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 6, 2012 at 3:48 AM Congratulations Don, will need to read it a couple more times to understand but am trying xx Don Johnson February 6, 2012 at 4:04 PM i think its about the positive and negative influences of life? the last bit is a thank you to bi devnath... sorry to be confusing:(

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2012 at 5:17 PM Interesting one, Don. I love your message to BL too!! a sweetie! Don Johnson January 26, 2012 at 5:26 PM the fool is forced into the game, to potter with words of fame, or platitudes so lame, but the cake is in the rising?

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2012 at 4:51 PM Interesting work..If for a contest, I need to check that one out..Good luck..reads like a winner..Thanks for the encouraging comment about my work..Sara

Russell Sivey January 26, 2012 at 9:36 AM That it positively a great write Don! There's no negativity about it at all, thus you say it's neutral...I don't think so! I love the poem, Great Work!!

Bl Devnath January 26, 2012 at 6:54 AM Congrats on your win all the ways. Thanks of my heart goes to you for this wonderful creation. Your love is precious for me, loved, bl

Nette Onclaud January 26, 2012 at 5:31 AM i like the hip attitude about birth here, don... is this for a contest?.. unusual style!.. congrats on your win in my serenity contest and thanks for your support in many ways... :) huggs!