Portraiture a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation

PORTRAITURE
an inviting
presence
hovering
  mysterious
freed
from
the past
peculiarly
alive
with
a nearness
beginning
gently
to emerge

the
unfamiliar
at a crossroads
  on the outskirts
arriving
this counterpart
ever changing
without
    knowing

evidently
 recognisable
sonorous
&relaxed

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Yann Rolland

Date: 7/16/2023 1:45:00 AM

enjoyed tour creativity, thanks