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Portrait of a Sad Man

A lame wolf, weathered by neglect and time Howling questions, pelted like throwing stones Melting away like mountain snow Abandoned by people wearing laughter on their skin Monstrous faces masked with smiles false Wondering at his mistakes, a life lost He drip drop drips deep into the ground For my father, who can at times be a sad man. Chynna Bear A Short Poem, Please

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/26/2016 9:16:00 PM
Chynna Bear, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:42:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulations! Much appreciated. :3
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Date: 9/3/2011 11:30:00 AM
A unique dedication, Chynna......congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!------Lori
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:25:00 AM
A Tenth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/2/2011 1:14:00 AM
A hard poem for you to write I'm sure. Congratulations on this win. Lee
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Date: 9/1/2011 4:38:00 PM
Chynna, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest ;)
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Date: 9/1/2011 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Chynna. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:40:00 AM
hey Chynna, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:34:00 AM
Congrats Chynna on your exciting win with this lovely poetry and tender dedication luv..
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Chynna
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Date: 8/30/2011 6:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Chynna. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 2:49:00 PM
A brilliant write:)
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