Portrait of a Mind

A desk
     detects
     a mind's
       neglect

     else
     reflects
       pure intellect
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Mentally challenging Rhyme, Gershon. You'll makes us think whether we want to or not. Bill
Kyser Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 9:34 PM
Clutter and dust, some crackers and cheddar // fuel for my writing, but keyboards work better…
Cheney Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 11:10 AM
I think my desk merely reflects I'm a lousy housekeeper.
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 11:16 AM
Your comment has really cracked me up, Kenneth! Sounds like you can 'keep your house!' ~ gw
Lawless Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 5:23 AM
Just cuz there's books on the desk doesn't mean I read 'em.....
Miller Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 2:06 AM
I love it!
Roper Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Well done, I hope you are doing well.. Blessings and hugs
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