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Portrait - Female With Wine

PORTRAIT – Female with wine

She’s looking off, chin lifted -
Some afternoon reverie –
This full-faced    blue-eyed    blond dreamer
A slim-stemmed glass of red is prominent, but barely sipped
Her expression (the redness in her eyes) is
Well    not a brown study   but surely not bliss
No    I’m guessing this musing has some soul-lingering favor –
A lover?
A loved one departed?
There is a certain intensity
A relaxed…fat preponderance
Her elbows on the table at rest
Arms, fingers cradling
Her long, flaxen hair sits atop both shoulders with a certain…
With  flowing sophistication 
Hope?
No.
More a doting resignation
“When the loving flame dies
Smoke”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Burd Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 2:47 PM
I've just taken a trip to the art museum and enjoyed the old Dutch Masters? Am I correct. Nicholas Maes is one of my favorite-are you familiar with his work? Also reminiscent of "The Girl with the Pearl Earring" by Vermeer-you've captured your subject beautifully.
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Her chin tilts as she catches my eye, I look to the side and down/ the scent of soup wafts from the kitchen..a folded white cloth napkin lays across her thighs ...Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:46 PM
good it's posted here. THis is an awesome study of a painting.
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I could almost see the scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
Maverick Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 11:00 PM
I see a picture from.your.words Daver. Was this taken From life? I think you have put well the air of sad resignation? quite a good write I say."
Falotico Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Very good poetry. Deep piece my friend. Michael
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