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Portal To the Universe

The Milky Way gleams Through Earth's portal to the stars Wonders to explore * For Gareth's contest

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Joe Inka

Date: 2/1/2011 6:49:00 PM

Sometimes I get lost in the thoughts you express here, even though they drive me crazy

Daver Austin

Date: 4/16/2010 7:13:00 AM

I was just looking over your comments to Nathan Dilts. Amazing! We said nearly the same thing, same words. And I hadn't read your comments before my own. SPOOKY!!Love, daver

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/16/2010 3:33:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome comment. This was the first poem I wrote after my visitors left yesterday. Lovely penned your "Portal to the Universe"! It remineded me to the southern skies over the Papua New Guinean mountains. Love, Gert

Rick Parise

Date: 4/15/2010 1:35:00 PM

You are so kind~your words here (portal) set a dream an infinite wonder(your pushing me to be the best I can) Your truly an inspiration. 2nd comment on this one, it took me deeper today~God bless you special one Rick

Brian Strand

Date: 4/15/2010 9:15:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Carolyn.Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/14/2010 4:44:00 PM

Great title..and One great Haiku dear Carolyn..Charma

Royal Trevino

Date: 4/13/2010 11:51:00 AM

Wonders indeed:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2010 9:11:00 AM

Great descriptive penned Haiku..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..My heart is weeping for these children that get captured in this sex trafficing in other countries but it also happens here...Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 4/13/2010 7:37:00 AM

This is a great Haiku Carolyn...I was just watching a documentary on Galileo ! He lived to be just about 78 ya know. Awesome write ! james

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/12/2010 10:30:00 PM

To explore different worlds, just like ours, and to explore unique worlds, that might be new.a star is always a wonder. -Always&Forever Lynette

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/12/2010 3:42:00 PM

with an eternity to search you'll have plenty of time. john

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2010 3:22:00 PM

Yes Carolyn ..he did name the "star" after me and he was killed in a trucking accident so I have treasured both his gift and his child that I had with him... I just read James's poem about u and its utterly beautiful ... a true emotional piece relating to such an event... I remember reading the one u wrote for the contest also... an indelible mark forever... thankxxx for your special comments today...luv ...Linda-Marie..

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/12/2010 3:16:00 PM

Hey Carolyn, Thnx for reading and leaving your kind comments on my piece...means a whole lot to me...Jimmy

Joshua Lacey

Date: 4/12/2010 1:42:00 PM

quite the adventerous spirit! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2010 1:13:00 PM

good one, Carolyn. I think you will do well in his contest. This is one I might have to pass by. I'm just not a "stars" person. Speaking of which, Poor LInda. I don't know if i can do HERs either. About my Boston Cream, that is a really yummy cake, if I can ever locate the recipe, and NO, I would never write about the tea parties going on these days because I hate them, and my poem might piss people off. haha. LUv ya, andrea

James Fraser

Date: 4/12/2010 10:34:00 AM

And many wonders there are out there, just waiting to be explored Carolyn, enjoyable Haiku > good luck in the contest >> James

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 4/12/2010 5:37:00 AM

I love haikus. Your choice of words really make the mind wonder. Good visuals for the mind here.

Kim M

Date: 4/11/2010 11:19:00 AM

Very dreamy haiku. Stirs thoughts of astral travel and experiencing planets up close.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/11/2010 8:14:00 AM

Earth's portal....I love that line, Carolyn! Good job!! This should do well in Gareth's contest...it is lovely! Love, Carrie

Gareth James

Date: 4/11/2010 2:31:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest, Carolyn.

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/10/2010 11:54:00 PM

another one that sends definite waves outward and links information within,,,best of luck in the contest my friend,,,Blessings..cecil

Brian Strand

Date: 4/10/2010 11:39:00 PM

Thank you for the welcome blog comments Carolyn.Rgds Brian & congrats on your featured poetry this week

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/10/2010 10:44:00 PM

Good luck in the contest Carolyn. This is a good one. Charles

Rick Parise

Date: 4/10/2010 8:33:00 PM

Dreaming out and beyond, I love it!!!!!!!!!! sets me into a dream!! Gareths got his work cut out! god bless you and Reach Rick Parise~~~~~~~~~~~~~Salem, oregon

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2010 8:30:00 PM

Hey, awesome idea for this contest Carolyn. Good luck. Agape, Moses